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一、文體概述

利弊分析類書面表達(dá)往往是對(duì)某種事物的利弊進(jìn)行對(duì)比，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)。通常包括以下內(nèi)容：說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀→事物本身的利弊→你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀或前景的看法。該類文體一般使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，也可根據(jù)實(shí)際情況使用相應(yīng)的時(shí)態(tài)。

二、必備短語(yǔ)

1. positive aspects 積極方面

2. negative aspects 消極方面

3. in conclusion 總而言之

4. be beneficial to... 對(duì)……有益

5. do harm to / be harmful to 對(duì)……有害

6. through the above analysis 通過(guò)以上分析

7. in my opinion/as far as I am concerned 就我而言

8. the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages 利遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于弊

9. have positive/ negative effects on... 對(duì)……產(chǎn)生有利/不利的影響

10. play an important/a significant role /part in在……中起重要作用

三、套用句式

1. Generally， its advantages can be seen/listed as follows. 通常它有如下的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

2. It is obvious that the disadvantages are much more than advantages. 很顯然，弊遠(yuǎn)大于利。

3. Just as a saying goes，“every coin has two sides”， and this is no exception. 正如常言所說(shuō)“任何東西都有兩面”，這也不例外。

4. Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. 現(xiàn)在很多人偏向于A因?yàn)樗谖覀內(nèi)粘Ｉ钪衅鹬匾饔谩?/p>

5. Through the above analysis， I believed that the positive aspects far overweight the negative ones. 通過(guò)以上分析，我相信積極方面遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于消極方面。

四、習(xí)作修改 下列習(xí)作中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

With the development of society， more and more people have money and time for travelling. Travelling is the very good activity. When we are tiring of our work or study， we may travel in our spare time to breathe the fresh air， enjoy the beauty of nature or the charms of other cities and build up our bodies.

But sometime， travelling is something not very much comfortable. The weather changes a lot， and we may get sick easy. The worst of all is that you may have my money stolen or get injured. Of course， travelling was a waste of time and money.

So in my opinion， we should make full preparations for our travel， get the informations about the weather， try to go with a fellow traveler so that you can take care each other， and avoid any accidents.

五、課堂練習(xí)

現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人使用微信（Wechat）作為交流平臺(tái)，微信有它的利弊。請(qǐng)寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓?duì)微信的看法。 要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：使用時(shí)免費(fèi)，方便快捷；

2. 缺點(diǎn)：個(gè)人信息可能會(huì)被泄露；當(dāng)面交流的機(jī)會(huì)變少；

3. 你的觀點(diǎn)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Nowadays， Wechat is becoming increasingly fashionable and popular.

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六、課外作業(yè)

現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)，手機(jī)作為一種通訊工具，固然有它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有它的缺點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓?duì)中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的看法。 要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：聯(lián)系方便。

2. 手機(jī)的缺點(diǎn)：分散學(xué)習(xí)注意力。

3. 你對(duì)中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的態(tài)度。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion， therere both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones.

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參考答案

習(xí)作修改

本文是一篇關(guān)于旅游的利與弊的文章。

1. the→a 意思是“旅游是一項(xiàng)很好的活動(dòng)”，表示“一項(xiàng)”用a。

2. tiring→tired此處人作主語(yǔ)，be tired of為固定搭配，意為“厭煩”。

3. or→and 因“大自然的美”和“城市的魅力”應(yīng)為并列關(guān)系，而非選擇關(guān)系。

4. sometime→sometimes 根據(jù)句意可知，此處表示“有時(shí)”，用sometimes。

5. 把very后的much去掉 因very much修飾動(dòng)詞；這里是修飾形容詞comfortable。

6. easy→easily 修飾動(dòng)詞get，應(yīng)用副詞形式。

7. my→your 因該句主語(yǔ)是you，應(yīng)將my改為your，前后人稱才一致。

8. was→is 全文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故was也應(yīng)改用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)is。

9. informations→information 因information為不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。

10. 在care后加of 因take care of為固定搭配，意為“照顧”。

課堂練習(xí)

Nowadays， Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Generally speaking， its advantages can be seen as follows. First， we use it for free and can save money. Second， its convenient for us to communicate with our friends everywhere and at any time. Furthermore， Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly.

However， problems exist meanwhile. Firstly， our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result， we can be in trouble. Moreover， it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse， relationship could break down.

In my views， though Wechat has improved our lives， it should be used properly. We shouldnt lose ourselves.

課外作業(yè)

Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion， therere both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones. Mobile phones can help students keep in touch with their family and friends when necessary. It is convenient for students if there is emergency. However， there are some problems with using mobile phones. Some students focus too much attention on chatting and sending messages， which affects their studies in a way. Whats more， sometimes the ring and shake of mobile phones also distract their attention in class. Besides， for students， using mobile phones costs too much and it will give their parents extra burden. In my opinion， its better for students not to carry mobile phones with them to school in order to learn intently.

責(zé)任編輯 蔣小青