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（一）

（2020安徽池州上學(xué)期期末）Our school witnessed quite a few changes in the past few years. There used to have a playground on one side of the main mad. And now what you can see is a new office building， where our teachers prepare for their lessons. On the other side stand another building—our library. Most of the students like to study in the library， main because the atmosphere in them is suitable for learning. Another reason is because we can get plenty of useful informations from various learning materials. Much to my pleased， our school becomes more beautiful than ever before.

（二）

（2020安徽黃山一檢）

Dear Jim，

How are you doing？You ask me about how our school performs our PE classes in your last letter， so Im writing to share you some details.

Our school has a sports field where covers an area of about two square kilometers. Equip with two playgrounds as well as a splendid stadium， our school offers you an opportunity to do a variety of sports. Not only do we take football and basketball courses， but our school also hold all kinds of sports competitions. As the member on our school team， my most favorite sport is football. As far as I am concerned， anything is better than playing football，which encourages us to cooperate active with others.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

（三）

（2020河南平頂山一檢）Hello， Jim！Id like to share mine voluntary work with you this summer vacation， when I worked for a guide in the museum of my city. The work was interesting and tiring. It was the first time that I have learnt the origin of my city， which made me understood its amazing history. There were also other student volunteer in the museum. Ive been learnt how to get on well with them. Besides， Ive gained some social experience cant be learnt from textbooks. In the word， Ive got a wonderful and extreme valuable summer vacation.

（四）

（2020湖南永州一模）Hello， Jack！I need your help. I am going to organizing a money-raising project for poor students. However， I am at a loss about what to start. I dont know what type of people was most likely to donate. Is it a good idea to visit to local business people？Besides， what is best way to let the public know your ideas？Last but not least， how can I guarantee that the raising money will be sent to the students who really needs it？Considering that you have much experience in organizing similarly projects， I am wondering whether you could give me some suggestion.

（五）

（2020河北保定上學(xué)期期末）Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they dont wear. The donation box， I think， is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes which dont fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help those people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and make the world a better place to live in.

（六）

（2020湖南永州二模）One morning that I was in primary school， I tried cooking for first time. As my parents werent in， I have to cook something to eat. I took an egg from the refrigerator， putting some oil in the pan and cracked an egg into it. After a few second， I tried to turn the egg over in case it would get burnt. Unexpectedly， it caught fire. Not known what to do， I screamed but rushed out of the kitchen. After a while， I realized I should put out the fire， so I returned back， only to find something but a black burnt egg. Ive learned that I cant be too carefully while cooking.

（七）

（2020陜西榆林一模）Last week our class vote on what to do for our class outing： visit the Singapore Zoo and go on the night Safari（夜間動物園）. Our girls wanted to go to the zoo， but since we were in the minority， we lost the boys， who all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for students， which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as everything at the souvenir shop. The Safari was scary but really a fun. As we took the ride over the parks dark jungle， we could see the eyes of many creatures look out at us. Most of the animals here sleep when there is sunlight and wake up at night.

（八）

（2019安徽黃山三檢）Today we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson， a foreign teacher from Beijing University， to give us an English lesson. All of us were deeply impressed on this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class with an amazing English story， that attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that we could follow her well. Greatly inspiring， most of us took an active part in classroom activities. After class， many students being interviewed spoke high of him. They said that never they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson， we came to the conclusion what it is not so difficult to learn English if we find a good way.

（九）

（2020福建廈門一檢）Last week， I planned to pay a visit my grandparents. They were so exciting to hear the news because we have not seen each other for a long time. But my best friend invited I to take part in his birthday party and share his happinesses. When I thought of a promise that I had made it， I found it hard to make a decision. Eventually I chose to refusing my friends invitation. Seeing my grandparents smile and the deliciously food they cooked for me， I knew I did something correct. We must keep our promise， and we will lose trust from others.

（十）

（2020廣東潮州上學(xué)期期末）Years ago， all my parents were involved in a serious car accident. Uncle Bob takes on the role as a father to me. I lived with them during that period. He allowed me to stay with him though his home was not really bigger. He showed his care and love for me with paying attention to my health， education and which I needed at that time. I really appreciated a time he spent with me. We were used to go on trips together. We would just spend days with either playing our guitars or read our favorite car magazines. I always felt gratefully towards him. He was like a father figure who would always give me encouragement.

（十一）

（2020廣東中山上學(xué)期期末）The Chinese New Year festival， which is my most favourite time of year， lasted for 15 days. At midnight on New Years Eve， every door and window in the house is opened to let the old year leaving. We eat dumplings and set off fireworks. Children were given little red envelopes with luckily money inside. In the last day we have the Lantern Festival， that we go out at night carrying paper lanterns. During the festival， they drop in at relativesand friendshouses bringing gifts or red envelopes， and greeting one another with“Happy New Year”. This is special way for us to express good wish to each other.

（十二）

（2020山西太原上學(xué)期期末）I was far behind most of my classmate when I become a senior three student. Moreover， I couldnt follow the teacher completely in class. One day， I was too much exhausted and confused to concentrate on which the teacher taught. Unfortunate， I was invited to share my own idea. As you can imagine， I couldnt say a word. Feeling embarrassing， I ready to be criticized. Much on my astonishment， the teacher instructed and encouraged me patiently. I was such touched that I was determined to try his best to study hard. Now I am quite confident about my study.

（十三）

（2020福建三明上學(xué)期期末）One afternoon in early spring， I caught sight of poster in my community on which read“Green Community， Beautiful Home”. I found the activity quite meaningfully and decided to take part.

Since my mom was fond of flowers， we choose Chinese roses. With everything preparing， I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered it.

Now looking after plant has become part of my life. This way， I can feel the simple pleasure of life but harvest a sense of achievement. Seeing the seedlings are grown little by little， I cant help picturing what beautiful our neighborhood will be when all the flowers come out.

（十四）

（2020安徽合肥一模）I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky， I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true， I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides， I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot， Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.

（十五）

（2020安徽淮北一模）My senior high school life is almost over. Although exciting about entering college， I cant help miss those good old days so much that I feel sad. Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar. However， I come to realize nature never stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new one come to life. We， like everything in nature， has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it， I am a kind of calm. Now Id like to recall the most wonderful things which have happened， and accept happy whatever is to happen.

（十六）

（2020福建福州上學(xué)期期末）I felt so proudly when my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feel that I can achieve anything. Only three years ago， I was terrifying of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this， I decided to join in a skating club. My teacher was great and after I knew it， I was able to skate. He then persuaded me try ice hockey. I loved one and was soon practise with my local team almost every evening. Were now training for national competitions and hope to be champion some day. But my final goal is to be a ice hockey teacher.

參考答案

（一）

Our school ∧ witnessed quite a few changes in the past few years. There used to have a playground on one side of the main mad. And now what you can see is a new office building， where our teachers prepare for their lessons. On the other side stand another building—our library. Most of the students like to study in the library， main because the atmosphere in them is suitable for learning. Another reason is because we can get plenty of useful informations from various learning materials. Much to my pleased， our school becomes more beautiful than ever before.

（七）

Last week our class vote on what to do for our class outing： visit the Singapore Zoo and go on the night Safari（夜間動物園）. They girls wanted to go to the zoo， but since we were in the minority， we lost the boys， who all wanted the safari. We got ∧ the admission rate for students， which was greatly since I still had enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as everything at the souvenir shop. The Safari was scary but really a fun. As we took the ride over the parks dark jungle， we could see the eyes of many creatures look out at us. Most of the animals here sleep when there is sunlight and wake up at night.

（八）

Today we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson， a foreign teacher from Beijing University， to give us a English lesson. All of us were deeply impressed on this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class with an amazed English story， which attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that we could follow her well. Greatly inspired， most of us took an active part in classroom activities. After class， many students being interviewed spoke high of him. They said that never ∧ they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson， we came to the conclusion what it is not so difficult to learn English if we find a good way.

（九）

Last week， I planned to pay a visit ∧ my grandparents. They were so exciting to hear the news because we have not seen each other for a long time. But my best friend invited I to take part in his birthday party and share his happinesses. When I thought of a promise that I had made it， I found it hard to make a decision. Eventually I chose to refusing my friends invitation. Seeing my grandparents smile and the deliciously food they cooked for me， I knew I did something correct. We must keep our promise， and we will lose trust from others.

（十）

Years ago， all my parents were involved in a serious car accident. Uncle Bob takes on the role as a father to me. I lived with them during that period. He allowed me to stay with him though his home was not really bigger. He showed his care and love for me with paying attention to my health， education and which I needed at that time. I really appreciated ∧ time he spent with me. We were used to go on trips together. We would just spend days with either playing our guitars or read our favorite car magazines. I always felt gratefully towards him. He was like a father figure who would always give me encouragement.

（十一）

The Chinese New Year festival， which is my most favourite time of year， lasted for 15 days. At midnight on New Years Eve， every door and window in the house is opened to let the old year leaving. We eat dumplings and set off fireworks. Children were given little red envelopes with luckily money inside. In the last day we have the Lantern Festival， that we go out at night carrying paper lanterns. During the festival， they drop in at relativesand friendshouses bringing gifts or red envelopes， and greeting one another with“Happy New Year”. This is ∧ special way for us to express good wish to each other.

（十二）

I was far behind most of my classmate when I become a senior three student. Moreover， I couldnt follow the teacher completely in class. One day， I was too much exhausted and confused to concentrate on which the teacher taught. Unfortunate， I was invited to share my own idea. As you can imagine， I couldnt say a word. Feeling embarrassing， I ∧ ready to be criticized. Much on my astonishment， the teacher instructed and encouraged me patiently. I was such touched that I was determined to try his best to study hard. Now I am quite confident about my study.

（十三）

One afternoon in early spring， I caught sight of ∧ poster in my community on which read“Green Community， Beautiful Home”. I found the activity quite meaningfully and decided to take part.

Since my mom was fond of flowers， we choose Chinese roses. With everything preparing， I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered it.

Now looking after plant has become part of my life. This way， I can feel the simple pleasure of life but harvest a sense of achievement. Seeing the seedlings are grown little by little， I cant help picturing what beautiful our neighborhood will be when all the flowers come out.

（十四）

I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across ∧ sky， I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true， I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides， I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot， Ill never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.

（十五）

My senior high school life is almost over. Although exciting about entering college， I cant help miss those good old days so much that I feel sad. Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar ∧ . However， I come to realize nature never stood still. Different seasons come and go. Plants and animals die and new one come to life. We， like everything in nature， has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it， I am a kind of calm. Now Id like to recall the most wonderful things which have happened， and accept happy whatever is to happen.

（十六）

I felt so proudly when my team won the ice hockey competition. It made me feel that I can achieve anything. Only three years ago， I was terrifying of walking or skating on ice. To deal with this， I decided to join in a skating club. My teacher was great and after I knew it， I was able to skate. He then persuaded me ∧ try ice hockey. I loved one and was soon practise with my local team almost every evening. Were now training for national competitions and hope to be champion some day. But my final goal is to be a ice hockey teacher.