陳廣乙
一、文體概述
問(wèn)題解決型作文要求考生對(duì)生活中的某個(gè)問(wèn)題簡(jiǎn)要描述并提出解決方法。其常見(jiàn)形式是:一、目前存在某個(gè)問(wèn)題;二、這種問(wèn)題的危害或產(chǎn)生原因;三、給出解決方法。此類(lèi)作文的重點(diǎn)在于如何解決問(wèn)題,占文章的1/3至1/2的篇幅。
二、必備短語(yǔ)
1. with the rapid development of ... 隨著……的快速發(fā)展
2. it is of great importance for us to... 我們十分必要去做某事
3. take some measures to solve this problem采取措施解決問(wèn)題
4. more problems are brought to our attention 我們關(guān)注到很多問(wèn)題
5. spare no effort to solve this problem 不遺余力解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題
6. cope with the situation 處理這個(gè)局面
7. take ones advice聽(tīng)取某人的建議
8. it is high time that we did sth 是我們做某事的時(shí)候了
9. take sth. into consideration 將某事納入考慮
10. there is still a long way for us to do sth要做到某事,我們還有很長(zhǎng)的路走
三、套用句式
1. Recently, environmental pollution has been brought into public attention. 最近環(huán)境污染已經(jīng)成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。
2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem of cheating. 現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始關(guān)注作弊問(wèn)題。
3. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 有很多原因?qū)е逻@個(gè)現(xiàn)象發(fā)生。
4. It is high time that effective measures were taken to cope with this situation. 為了處理好局勢(shì),我們有必要采取有效的措施。
5. Peoples awareness of environmental protection should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. 我們要提升人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)以及采取恰當(dāng)?shù)拇胧?/p>
四、習(xí)作修改 下列習(xí)作中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
Nowadays, cars have caused a lot of serious problems in our world, that take us a lot of efforts to solve them. All the time, they are pumping plenty of waste gases into the atmosphere, cause diseases and even deaths. One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels. Because it may take decades for the new models to complete replace the traditional ones. Other solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and limit the use of private car. On whole, the solution to air pollution need the cooperation from the government and the public. This problem can be solved only by the help of science and technology.
五、課堂練習(xí)
假設(shè)你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華,你發(fā)現(xiàn)近來(lái)學(xué)??荚嚧嬖谧鞅讍?wèn)題,請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)Mr. Johnson寫(xiě)一封信反映情況,要點(diǎn)如下:
1. 目前考試作弊的現(xiàn)象普遍, 對(duì)教學(xué)造成嚴(yán)重危害;
2. 校方應(yīng)該怎么做。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
提示:出勤率class attendance
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.
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Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、課外作業(yè)
假設(shè)你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華,你發(fā)現(xiàn)考生的宿舍生活存在問(wèn)題,請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)Mr. Johnson寫(xiě)一封信反映情況,要點(diǎn)如下:
1. 宿舍中時(shí)常會(huì)有不和諧現(xiàn)象,對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)生活影響較大;
2. 如何創(chuàng)造和諧宿舍生活。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。
提示:和諧的 harmonious
Dear Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.
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Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
參考答案與范文
習(xí)作修改
本篇講的是因?yàn)槠?chē)數(shù)量的增多,導(dǎo)致了許多問(wèn)題。就此作者提出了兩個(gè)解決辦法,并認(rèn)為科技是解決問(wèn)題的好辦法。
1. that→which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,替代前面的先行詞problems,用which。
2. 劃去solve后的them因不定式的賓語(yǔ)就是句子的主語(yǔ)時(shí),不定式后不再用賓語(yǔ)。
3. cause→causing 此處為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),用現(xiàn)在分詞。
4. Because→But 上文提到一種解決辦法,下文寫(xiě)到需要幾十年的時(shí)間,形成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,用but。
5. complete→completely 修飾動(dòng)詞replace用副詞。
6. other→another 對(duì)應(yīng)上文提到的one solution,這里提出另一個(gè)解決辦法,用another。
7. car→cars 限制私家車(chē)的使用,car為可數(shù)名詞,應(yīng)用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。
8.在on和whole中間加the 因on the whole為固定詞組,意為“大體上,就全體而論”。
9. need→needs 因主語(yǔ)solution為單數(shù),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞需要用第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式。
10. by→with 表示“在……的幫助下”,用with the help of...。
課堂練習(xí)
Dear Mr. Johnson ,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Nowadays cheating in exams is becoming more and more common in our school. This phenomenon will do harm to the teaching and learning quality. As a result, we must put an end to this trend as soon as possible.
As for solutions, many a way can be adopted to cope with the cheating phenomenon. First of all, our school should call on every student to fight against cheating and report it to teachers if they saw someone cheating and they should be protected. In addition, teachers should help students form the right attitude towards exam results. Lastly, strict punishment should be given to those caught cheating. Only by doing these can this problem be solved quickly.
Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
課外作業(yè)
Dear Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Recently, the harmony in the dormitory of our campus is easily disturbed. We saw fights and quarrels over very tiny little things, which was absolutely unacceptable.
As we know, dormitory life is an essential part of our high school life. So we must take measures immediately to bring back harmony in the dorm.
There are several ways to achieve our aim. Firstly, teachers should help students understand that harmony in our school life has a huge effect on our study. Secondly, students should be educated to respect others living patterns and get rid of improper living habits, if there are any. Thirdly, when disagreements appear, students should turn to teachers for help instead of solving them themselves.
Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
責(zé)任編輯 蔣小青