程小明

一、 基本情況

從上表可以看出：各省高考寫作題涵蓋了應(yīng)用文、記敘文、議論文等各種體裁。話題仍然以日常生活、個人情況和熱點話題為主。大大減少了控制性，所有題都給考生留下了充分發(fā)揮想象的空間，這與廣東卷的讀寫任務(wù)題有異曲同工之妙。

筆者將2013年全國各地的高考寫作題改編成廣東高考的基礎(chǔ)寫作題或任務(wù)寫作題，同時對高考原題的寫作內(nèi)容、寫作要求和范文都作了相應(yīng)的修改，方便2014屆的考生平時訓練。

二、基礎(chǔ)寫作

1. 江西卷

星光中學（Xingguang High School）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 目的：鼓勵學生參加戶外鍛煉。

2. 時間：4月10日。

3. 地點：大青山（Daqing Mountain）。

4. 活動的過程：

（1）8點在山腳下集合出發(fā)往山頂；

（2）一路上聊天、唱歌、說笑、呼吸新鮮空氣和欣賞美景；

（3）10點到頂，大家沐浴陽光，雀躍歡呼。

4. 感受：受益匪淺，接近大自然，放松，促進友誼。

[寫作要求]

只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

寫作點撥

1. 報道已舉行過了的活動要用一般過去時。

2. 表目的可用不定式短語；表原因可用分詞短語作狀語。

3. 表達最后一個要點可用not only...but also...結(jié)構(gòu)。

2. 新課標一

假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他，你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明：

李明特征：身高1.85，結(jié)實，瘦臉，戴眼鏡，穿藍色夾克，提黑色行李箱。

航班編號：CA985。

到達時間：8月6日上午11：30。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 寫信的目的；

2. 李明外貌特征；

3. 航班編號；

4. 到達的時間。

[寫作要求]

1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不算入總句數(shù)。

Dear Peter，

How are you doing？

...

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

寫作點撥

（1）以一般將來時為主。

（2） 要用到介詞短語、分詞短語、從句等。

（3） 由于要點提示少，可合理添加一些信息。

3. 新課標二

假定你是李華，自制一些中國結(jié)（Chinese knots）。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要點包括：

1. 外觀：

（1）形狀：鉆石；

（2）材料：紅絲線、布和其它材料；

（3）尺寸： 約5英寸長，4英寸寬。

2. 象征意義：友誼、愛情和好運。

3. 作用：送禮、掛在房里。

4. 價格：每個12.99 美元。

5. 提示：有需要了解更多情況者，請寫信。

[寫作要求]

1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不算入總句數(shù)。

Dear Tom，

How are you doing？ I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. ...

Thank you！

Li Hua

寫作點撥

1. 該題是一篇說明文，故以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；

2. 要用到介詞短語、分詞短語、從句等。

3. 價格的表達有多種，如：sell something at a price of.../ sth costs money...

4 遼寧卷

一個英文網(wǎng)站面向中學生征稿。請你寫一篇英文稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個節(jié)日里的主要活動。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 時間：中國農(nóng)歷8月15日。

2. 特點：

（1）中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一，享有盛譽；

（2）無論多遠和多忙，家人會回家團圓慶祝；

（3）法定假日3天。

3. 主要活動：（1）家人團聚；（2） 賞月、吃月餅；（4） 還有旅游、訪友等其他活動。

[寫作要求]只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

寫作點撥

1. 以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

2. 要用到同位語、介詞短語、分詞短語作狀語、從句等。

3. 可合理添加一些信息以充實寫作內(nèi)容。

5 北京卷

假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英文寫一篇周記。記述爸爸出差期間，媽媽生病，你照顧她的過程。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 時間：上周一

2. 事由：

（1）父親向我和母親告別去出差三天；

（2）第二天早上母親生病， 我取藥和為她做面條，母親很快康復(fù)；

（3）父親出差回來，母親告知情況；

（4）父親表揚我。

3. 你的看法。

[寫作要求]只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。

寫作點撥

1. 因為是周記，所以主語是“我”，時態(tài)用過去時，如一般過去時、過去將來時和過去完成時。

2. 可用分詞作伴隨狀語和時間狀語。

3. 從句的使用也可以成為該寫作的亮點，尤其是介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

6. 重慶卷 （求助信/保護長江江豚）

假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請用英文給WWF（世界自然保護基金組織）寫一封信，請他們提供幫助。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 寫信目的：報告中國長江江豚（finless porpoise）的危急狀況。

2. 簡述江豚現(xiàn)狀： 中國長江江豚受人類活動影響而瀕臨滅絕，目前總數(shù)不足100只；

3. 希望WWF如何幫助：

（1）資助江豚保護項目；

（2）對長江江豚進行近距離的觀察；

（3）就如何保護它們給予指導(dǎo)。

4. 表示感謝并期望回復(fù)。

[寫作要求]

1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不算入總句數(shù)。

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im a student from Chongqing， China.

…

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

寫作點撥

1. 注意使用一些寫求助信的客套用語，如：If it is not too much inconvenient， would you please do...？

2. 簡述江豚現(xiàn)狀時可用一個where 引導(dǎo)的定語從句；表達第三要點要用到賓語從句和條件狀語從句。

7. 天津卷（競選演講稿）

假設(shè)你是某大學的學生李津，你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，負責規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關(guān)活動，你欲參選，請按以下提示，寫一篇競選演講稿。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 個人的優(yōu)勢：（1） 性格外向、與人相處融洽；（2）善于組織各種活動。

2. 組織校內(nèi)活動的設(shè)想：舉辦講座、英語晚會等；

3. 組織校際交流活動的設(shè)想：舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等；

4. 表達競選的愿望。

[寫作要求]

1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不算入總句數(shù)。

參考詞匯：vice president（副主席） run for（競選）

Good afternoon， my dear friends，

My name is Li Jin，

…

Thank you.

寫作點撥

1. 以一般將來時為主，同時要到表“打算”的不同表達，如：I will do... / I am going to do.../ I plan to do... / I intend to do...等。

2. 第一要點的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系是因果關(guān)系，故可用分詞短語作狀語；表達第二、三要點要用到表目的、舉例等語言手段。

3. 表達第四個要點時要適當添加一些合理的信息，如for the sake of .... / If you trust me...等，以充實句子。

三、任務(wù)寫作

1. 江蘇卷

請根據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解， 以約120個詞就“Actions Speak Louder than Words”寫一篇英語短文。

參考詞匯： banner （橫幅） stump （樹樁）

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；

2. 概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；

3. 舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。

寫作點撥

1. 表達第一個要點時要用表對比的語言手段while...才能把兩幅圖的差異描述出來。

2. 按要點分段，且每個要點可用一個主題句，位于每段的段首，且單獨一句話，然后才是支持主題句的論據(jù)。

3. 表達第三個要點可以用正反式來拓展內(nèi)容要點，故要用到一些表“相反”的語言手段，如：instead of， rather than， on the contrary等。

2. 福建卷

現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴重。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請根據(jù)上面的漫畫，以約120個詞寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 描述漫畫內(nèi)容；

2. 分析漫畫所揭示的問題；

3. 提出你的看法。

注意：短文開頭已給出。

參考詞匯： pave the way（鋪平道路）

From the picture， we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. ...

寫作點撥

1. 該寫作第一個要點也要用到對比的語言手段...while...來描述孩子與父母之間的所作所為之間的差異，因描述的是一種社會現(xiàn)象，故用一般現(xiàn)在時。

2. 表達第二個要點時可用It is not uncommon that...來引出該段的主題句，并陳述由此現(xiàn)象造成的后果。

3. 表達第三個要點時也可以用instead of， rather than， on the contrary等。

3. 安徽卷

假設(shè)你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請你以“On the Way to School”為題，用約120個詞寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 遵守交通法規(guī)；

2. 注意舉止文明。

寫作點撥

1. 表達要點一時可使用“現(xiàn)象+結(jié)果+要求”的模式來表達，表達現(xiàn)象可用doing something is not uncommon. / It is not uncommon for sb to do.../ We can see a common phenomenon that...等。

2. 表達第二個要點時可先用一個主題句I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way， 然后表達自己在騎自行車、走路、開車時應(yīng)如何遵守交通規(guī)則以及一些其它的文明舉止，如：不亂丟垃圾、不隨地吐痰等。

4. 四川卷

某中學生英文報近期開辟專欄，討論學習習慣問題。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請你結(jié)合自身學習實際，用英文為該專欄寫一篇大約120個詞的稿件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 說明學習習慣與學習效果之間的關(guān)系；

2. 介紹一種好的學習習慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習慣的建議；

3. 描述自己在學習習慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進措施。

注意：開頭語已為你寫好；

Its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ________________________________.

寫作點撥

1. 在表達第一要點時可用一句諺語，如：Good habits lead to good endings. 來說明學習習慣與學習效果之間的關(guān)系，在說理時引用諺語，可增強說服力，注意使用諺語的套語如： A famous saying goes that... 然后說明學生注意良好學習習慣的重要性。

2. 表達第二個要點時不宜直接介紹一種好的學習習慣，可先引用身體健康方面的習慣，后介紹良好學習習慣的作用，最后介紹一種好的學習習慣，如記筆記、課后寫學習日記或讀后感、設(shè)錯題集等。

5. 山東卷

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

請以約120個詞給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 未及時回信的原因；

2. 你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）。

寫作點撥

1. 該寫作開頭和結(jié)尾沒有給出，故要注意寫電子郵件回復(fù)的格式和套語。

2. 第一個要點可分兩段寫：第一段：問候+寫信背景+寫信目的；第二段：“道歉”。

3. 第二個要點也可分兩段寫：第三段：“假期安排”部分，此要點可以用羅列式來拓展內(nèi)容要點； 第四段：補充說明+客套話。

6. 湖北卷

請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇大約120個詞的英語短文。

We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”， but we should also be aware that words can hurt people， too.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以自己或他人的經(jīng)歷說明以上提示的道理；

2. 你的感受。

寫作點撥

1. 寫經(jīng)歷時用一般過去時。

2. 可用到一些寫經(jīng)歷的模板，如：One incident is vivid in my mind. It happened when I was a teenager ... 或Ones experience is a good example to prove that... . 等。

3. 為把經(jīng)歷寫得生動，可用以下句型：（1）sb had done sth when sb did... （2） Doing sth， sb did... （3）Not until ....did one do...等。

7. 陜西卷

假定你是李華，請根據(jù)寫作要點用大約120個詞寫一篇英語周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務(wù)的一次經(jīng)歷。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 做家務(wù)的重要性和你做家務(wù)的理由；

2. 記述一次做家務(wù)的過程及感受。

寫作點撥

1. 表達第一個要點可用到表 “重要性”的模板，并可用遞進式拓展此要點，如：It is significant and meaningful for sb to do... . To begin with， ... Besides，.... Finally，...。

2. 表達第二個要點時可按時間順序，故要用到一些表時間的過渡性詞語，如：Firstly......Then..... After that...。

3. 在表達做家務(wù)后的感受，可描寫你和父母的一些心理活動，如：父母如何表揚你、給你一個擁抱等；你自己雖然辛苦了一上午，但感到非常開心。

8. 湖南卷

請以下列詞語為關(guān)鍵詞寫一篇大約120個詞的英語短文。

match winner loser result

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以你或他人的經(jīng)歷描述一場體育比賽；

2. 你對這場比賽的感受。

注意：必須使用所給4個關(guān)鍵詞。

寫作點撥

1. 描述一場球類比賽的經(jīng)歷，用過去時；

2. 描述一場比賽，要說明時間、地點和對象，表達比賽過程時可描述一些細節(jié)，但要適可而止。

3. 可用到一些體育比賽的諺語，如：友誼第一，比賽第二；失敗是成功之母等，合理運用諺語會起到畫龍點睛的作用，也是寫作增分的有效途徑。

9. 浙江卷

請以約120個詞就“One Thing Im Proud of”寫一篇英語作文，記述一件你自己認為得意的事情。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 記述事情經(jīng)過；

2. 簡述你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。

寫作點撥

1. 記述事情經(jīng)過要過去時，寫從中得到的啟示用一般現(xiàn)在時。

2. 可用到一些寫故事、經(jīng)歷的句型，如：（1） On doing sth， sb did... （2）I hit upon a brilliant idea that... （3） sb had no choice but to do sth. 等。

3. 在表達第二個要點時可以巧用與主題有關(guān)的諺語，如：熟能生巧等，這在總結(jié)全文時能起到深化主題的作用。

10. 上海卷

上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征集公眾意見。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

假設(shè)你是王敏，請用約120個詞給上海博物館寫一封英文信表達你的想法。

1. 簡述你寫信的目的；

2. 你對場所的選擇；

3. 說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進行對比）。

寫作點撥

1. 注意寫信的格式和套語，因為是寫給某個具體的單位，故要稱呼可以用To whom it may concern致有關(guān)人士，結(jié)尾要寫上Wang Min。

2.該寫作要用到表目的、原因、建議等語言手段。陳述多種原因或理由可用：

（1）The reasons why I choose.... are as follows： To begin with， ... Whats more，... Last but not the least， ...

（2）There are several reasons accounting for my choice of.... First， ... Second，... Third，...

11. 重慶卷寫作一

請結(jié)合材料，按要求用大約120個詞寫一篇英語短文。

A mother said，“My son is always on the phone， sleeping，out with friends，or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 這位母親的話說明了當今的一種什么社會現(xiàn)象？

2. 以你自己的實際情況談?wù)勀銓@位母親說的話的感受；

3. 你該如何與父母溝通？

寫作點撥

1. 第一個要點是以問題的形式呈現(xiàn)的，故可以直接回答此要點，且要說明理由；第二、三個要點的主體人稱要用第一人稱。

2. 該寫作要用到表原因、舉例等語言手段，以及各種從句；

3. 要用到表“感受”的寫作模版，如：

（1）I felt terribly sorry when I read...

（2）Having read...， I felt sorry/ ashamed for...

（3）The mothers words set me thinking that...

4. 表達第三個要點可用遞進式或羅列式拓展，因此可恰當使用一些過渡性詞語以增強文章的連貫性。

12. 北京卷寫作二

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 這幅圖傳遞了一個什么信息？

2. 簡單描述這幅圖的內(nèi)容并結(jié)合實際闡述我們在理想與現(xiàn)實中該作出什么選擇；

3. 在面臨不好的狀況時我們該怎么做？

寫作點撥

1. 要求考生先“理解圖畫”，考生寫作時要在首段直接提出立意。

2. 在發(fā)表看法時盡量使用一些評注性副詞，如evidently， apparently， undoubtedly， definitely等。

3. 該寫作要用到表“對比”和“結(jié)論”的語言手段，也可用分詞短語作狀語、倒裝句和雙重否定句，以增加文章的亮點。

基礎(chǔ)寫作 參考范文

1. 江西卷

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise， our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. （表目的的語言手段） At 8：00 am， we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting， singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.（分詞短語作狀語） About 2 hours later， we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine，（ 分詞短語作狀語） we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot because not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work but it also promoted the friendship among us. （not only引起的倒裝句）

2. 新課標一

Dear Peter，

How are you doing？

Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference，and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.？（合理添加信息）His flight number is CA985， and it will arrive at 11：30 am， August 6. With a thin face and a pair of glasses，（介詞短語） my uncle is strong，about 1.85 metres tall. Carrying a black suitcase （分詞短語作狀語）， he will be in a blue jacket so you will not easily miss him. （合理添加信息）

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

3. 新課標二

Dear Tom，

How are you doing？I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads， cloth and other materials. Costing only 12，99 US dollars each，（分詞短語作狀語） they look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond，（介詞短語） about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China， these knots stand for friendship， love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. If anyone wants to know more about the knots， let them write to me and do let me know if you need further information. Thank you！

Li Hua

4 遼寧卷

The Mid-Autumn Festival， one of the traditional Chinese festivals，（同位語手段） falls on the 15th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar and it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually， no matter how far away or how busy people are， they will try to come home for the celebration with three days of legal holiday. （介詞短語作狀語） The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month （合理信息）so what we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky，（with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/合理信息） we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit，sharing our stories. （分詞短語作狀語） In addition to these traditional activities， we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.（舉例的語言手段）

5 北京卷

Last Monday，saying goodbye to my mother and me，（分詞短語作時間狀語）my father went on a business trip during which he would be away for three days. （“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)的定語從句） Just the next morning， my mother wasnt feeling well because she had a bad cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her so thanks to my special care，（介詞短語表原因）my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home， my mother told him what had happened and he praised me for what I had done.（兩個賓語從句） I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.（賓語從句）

6. 重慶卷

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im a student from Chongqing，China. Im writing this letter to you to report you the emergent situation of the Chinese Yangtze finless porpoise where the number of this precious species has promptly dropped to less than 100 because of the human beings destructive influence.（where 引導(dǎo)的定語從句）I hope that your foundation can help those endangered species by donating some money to our project of protecting this endangered species.（賓語從句）If it is not too much inconvenient，（條件狀語從句）would you please come to China to have a close observation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction to prevent them from dying out completely？

Thanks for reading my letter and I am anxiously looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

7. 天津卷

Good afternoon，my dear friends，

My name is Li Jin. Being outgoing and getting on well with my classmates and teachers，（分詞短語作狀語）I am skilled in organizing all kinds of activities. Id like to run for the vice president of the English club in our school and I am fully qualified for the job. I know as the vice president，I am going to do the following things for the club： I will try to make it known to every student so that more students will be involved in the activities organized by the club. Also，in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English， （表目的） I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. （兩次舉例）For the sake of the English club，（合理添加信息）I hope all of you will vote for me.

Thank you.

三、任務(wù)寫作

1. 江蘇卷

Actions Speak Louder than Words

People celebrate Earth Day differently.（主題句） In picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain，while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.（表對比）

The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.”（主題句）Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it？The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken， like stopping cutting down trees， to better the environment.

Actions are important in other fields，too.（主題句）Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.（表相反）Only when we match our words with our actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.（only 引起的倒裝句結(jié)尾）

2. 福建卷

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son， well dressed， waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet， sweating. （表對比）

It is not an uncommon phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families， shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion， overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens growth and development. Instead of doing everything for them，（表相反） parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. （以only 引起的倒裝句結(jié)尾）

3. 安徽卷

On the Way to School

These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，（雙重否定） causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me， it should start on my way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.（主題句） If I ride a bike， Ill always keep to right and never cross the road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk， Ill never forget to use pedestrian crossing. If I drive a car， I will never run the red light or overspeed. Meanwhile， I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere but I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. （not only....but also 倒裝句） I hope my behavior will make a difference.

4. 四川卷

Its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. A famous saying goes that “Good habits lead to good endings.”，which shows the importance of habits. （諺語的使用） Good learning habits can make our study more efficient. As students， we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.

“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” also shows how a healthy everyday habit helps to build up our body. （諺語的使用） Thus， good learning habits can help us gain great learning results including high scores and abundant knowledge. At first， learning habits form our ways of thinking and attitudes towards the content of our learning. Obviously， a good habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. As we can see， cultivating a good habit is so important that I would like to introduce one good learning habits——keep a learning diary every day. We can start the habit by writing learning summary and remember to record something impressive and meaningful. Keep it in mind， and gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.

Whats more， I find out that I still have some bad learning habits as well. I can just concentrate on reading for a short time and I will overcome this problem by spending more effort on concentration practice.

I believe that through my efforts，I can gain good learning results by having good habits.

5. 山東卷

Dear Tom，

How are you doing？（問候） You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.（寫信背景） I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.（寫信目的）

How I wish I would read and reply to your email as soon as I received it. However， I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time， which is vital for me. As a result， I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me， you would make the same choice.（第二段為道歉信常用套路）

By the way， I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.（主題句）First and foremost， I will do a part time job so that my interpersonal skills will be improved.（拓展句1） Additionally， I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.（拓展句2） Last but not least， maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.（拓展句3）

These are my plan for the summer vacation. Whats yours？ I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（以合理的客套話結(jié)尾）

Yours，

Li Hua

6. 湖北卷

My friend Li Hua admires me for my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.

One incident is vivid in my mind. It happened when I was in Senior 1. （寫經(jīng)歷的適用模板） One day， we had just learned the new word “eccentric” in class when we were asked by our teacher to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My friend Li Hua is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this，（分詞短語作狀語） the whole class burst into laughter but Li Huas face turned red. After class， I learned from the teacher that Li Hua would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.（虛擬語氣的使用）

Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. （倒裝句） We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.

7. 陜西卷

Its significant and meaningful for children to participate in household chores. To begin with， they are given the chances to contribute their shares and are often rewarded with a spiritual fulfillment. Besides， it releases parents heavy burden of doing housework. But the most important of all， it helps to train their practical ability，thus keeping the balance between study and practice.（遞進式拓展） I am an 18 year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping， I suddenly got an idea： why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning？Firstly I collected all the books， newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that， I swept and mopped the floors. （時間順序） At this very moment， my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was， I never felt so happy.（描述心理活動）

8. 湖南卷

This afternoon an exciting basketball match was held between our class and Class 1 on the school playground. It was a close match.

The match began at 5 after class. Many teachers and students watched the games and cheered for their own classes. The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players，so the match went on fiercely at first. Now Li Hua from Class One got the ball. He was just about to pass it to Wang Hu， who was under the basket，when Li Ming from our class rushed up to stop him. Li Hua turned swiftly and with a beautiful back-up shot the ball fell into the basket. The match lasted forty minutes and the result was 38：40：the winner was Cass One， and we were the loser.

We didnt win the match，but we didnt lose heart. On the one hand，we think that friendship comes first， and match comes second. （諺語的使用） On the other hand， since we all tried our best， we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures. As long as we try our best， theres no need feeling regret for these failures. Whats more， we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.

In a word，success is important，so is failure，because its the mother of success.（諺語的使用）

9. 浙江卷

One Thing Im Proud of

I still remember how I became a good rope-skipper.

One day it was announced that there would be a rope-skipping competition in our class. On hearing the announcement，I felt nervous because I had never done rope skipping before. I was at a loss what to do. If I entered for the competition without knowing how to skip，I would certainly be laughed at by other classmates. I thought and thought. A brilliant idea came to my mind that I could ask my little sister to teach me. And she learned how to skip from my mother. How I felt ashamed to ask a 10-year-old girl to teach me. But I had no choice but to make concession for the sake of the competition. At the beginning I found it hard to learn to skip because my feet always blocked the rope. However，I didnt lose heart but changed my way of learning and used one foot to skip. Then step by step I used both of my feet to skip. Gradually I could skip faster and faster. A few days later，I could skip 100 times a minute！ Thanks to my sisters help and my perseverance I took part in the competition confidently. What was the most exciting thing is that I skipped 155 times and ranked fifth. （以上劃線部分為寫故事常用句型）

I am really proud of this experience， because it helps me realize that we can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect”. （諺語的使用）

10. 上海卷

To whom it may concern：

Ive learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that youre collecting suggestions on its location. Im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. （寫信的目的）

In my opinion，it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. （建議的表達手段） My reasons are as follows. （原因的表達手段） On one hand， it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries， which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art. On the other hand， as a well-known museum， Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

Therefore，I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.（建議的表達手段/ 總結(jié)全文）

Wang Min

11. 重慶卷寫作一

What the mother said shows a common phenomenon that teenagers seldom communicate with their parents due to the generation gap.（表原因的手段）Sometimes they are so addicted to what they like to do，such as chatting on line，playing，etc. that they are unwilling to talk to their parents. （表舉例的語言手段）

Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers，I feel ashamed and guilty.（表感受的寫作模版） I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know parents are the most important persons in my world， I just can not do what they like me to do. Sometimes I quarrel with them over some small matters. At other times I feel angry if they prevent me from doing what I like to do. I quite often stay away from my parents by playing games on my phone， sleeping， and hanging out with my friends， which worries them too much.

Now I am completely wrong but how can I get on well with my parents？First of all，I should regard my parents as my friends，believe in each other and understand each other. Secondly，I need to have heart-to-heart talks with my parents regularly，which will help me have a better understanding of each other. Last but not the least，I will tell them whats going on in school actively and turn to them for some advice if I have problems. Only in these way can I build up a better relationship with my parents.

12 北京卷寫作二

The picture conveys a message vividly that a difference between reality and dream may as well be recognized in our life. Evidently，（評注性副詞）realizing this difference and trying to shorten this gap is the key to achieving our goals.

In our daily life，some people are aware of their ability and qualities，making great efforts to improve themselves，（分詞短語作狀語）while（表對比）others ignore the difference between their earnest wish and reality，doing nothing but complain all the time.（分詞短語作狀語） The confused man in the picture is exactly the latter one. In this picture， the man is fishing on a big stone， waiting and waiting. （分詞短語作狀語）However，the small fish he has caught is totally different from the big one he is longing for. Now，before him are two options（倒裝句）：face the reality and keep trying till he gets the dreamy fish， or drop his fishing rod ， feeling desperate. （分詞短語作狀語） Apparently，（評注性副詞） he chooses the latter one. Such a situation is not uncommon in our society. （雙重否定句）We are faced with this kind of intriguing question all the time，and every choice we make has a great influence on our way to success. Making an accurate estimate of our realities and dreams，then sparing no efforts to approach the tip is undoubtedly （評注性狀語） the only option for us to make， provided that we are in great want of achieving our goals.

Based on the above statement，a conclusion will be arrived at that learning to accept the reality and adopting a positive attitude towards our dreams is what we are supposed to do， when faced with our less-satisfying situation.（表結(jié)論）

（作者單位：深圳市寶安中學）

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