廣東 黃園園

一、題型感知

概要寫(xiě)作要求考生基于所提供的短文寫(xiě)出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。概要寫(xiě)作應(yīng)具有以下五個(gè)特征：

1.簡(jiǎn)潔性：用盡量短的句子對(duì)較長(zhǎng)的原文進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)潔重述。

2.自主性：用自己的話語(yǔ)進(jìn)行概寫(xiě)，避免對(duì)原文進(jìn)行抄襲照搬。

3.理解性：表現(xiàn)考生對(duì)原文的精準(zhǔn)理解。需要注意的是，考生不能對(duì)原文進(jìn)行解釋和評(píng)論，也不能摻雜任何個(gè)人想法或做出任何評(píng)判，因此不能出現(xiàn)“I believe”“I think”等詞句。

4.忠實(shí)性：概要寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容和中心思想必須忠于原文主旨，不可偏離主題、肆意篡改。

5.連貫性：概要寫(xiě)作并非簡(jiǎn)單羅列要點(diǎn)，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間要有恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯?，從而使概要?xiě)作的內(nèi)容銜接緊密、脈絡(luò)清晰。概要寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容要完整連貫、獨(dú)立成篇。

二、命題特點(diǎn)

1.概要寫(xiě)作題會(huì)提供一篇350 詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫(xiě)出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

2.所選材料的體裁沒(méi)有限制，以說(shuō)明文、議論文和記敘文為主。在評(píng)判時(shí)更加注意內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)和問(wèn)題的準(zhǔn)確性，內(nèi)容的客觀性，用詞的簡(jiǎn)潔性以及內(nèi)容的連貫性這四個(gè)方面。該題型既考查考生的寫(xiě)作能力，又考查考生的閱讀能力及邏輯思維能力。

三、賦分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

(一) 評(píng)分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

2.評(píng)分時(shí)，閱卷人先根據(jù)考生所寫(xiě)概要的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于40或多于80的概要寫(xiě)作需從總分中扣除2分。

4.評(píng)分時(shí)，閱卷人主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮：

（1）對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；

（2）語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；

（3）上下文的連貫性；

（4）對(duì)各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。

5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是寫(xiě)作規(guī)范的重要方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，閱卷人應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。

6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以致影響交際，閱卷人可將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

（二）各檔次的給分范圍和要求

_______________________________________________檔次第五檔(21～25)第四檔(16～20)第三檔(11～15)第二檔(6～10)第一檔(1～5)___________________0描述________________________________理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)；能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；______________________________________________________________________________________完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言。理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋絕大部分要點(diǎn)；所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義的表達(dá)；比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；______________________________________________________________________________________有個(gè)別整句抄自原文。理解較為準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)；所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義的表達(dá)；應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使上下文內(nèi)容連貫；______________出現(xiàn)兩句或_________________________________________________________兩句以上整句抄自原文的現(xiàn)象。理解有誤差，僅涵蓋半數(shù)要點(diǎn)；有些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了意義的表達(dá)；較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容缺少連貫性；______________出現(xiàn)_______________________________________________________________兩句以上整句抄自原文的現(xiàn)象。沒(méi)有理解原文，造成概要內(nèi)容與原文主題不符；有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響了意義的表達(dá)；缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文內(nèi)容不連貫；_______________________________________________________________________________________多個(gè)句子抄自原文。白卷、內(nèi)容太少導(dǎo)致無(wú)法評(píng)判或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所提供的內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)。___________

四、寫(xiě)作步驟

Step 1 析體裁、明主旨

進(jìn)行概要寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要閱讀文章，確定文章的體裁和主題。概要寫(xiě)作的三種體裁的結(jié)構(gòu)如下：

Step 2 析結(jié)構(gòu)、定要點(diǎn)

閱讀完文章后，應(yīng)迅速分析一下文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。概要寫(xiě)作類(lèi)的文章多為“總—分、分—總、總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)或并列結(jié)構(gòu)，分析完結(jié)構(gòu)后再把文章的自然段按意義進(jìn)行劃分，以確定要寫(xiě)的要點(diǎn)數(shù)量(一般為4個(gè)要點(diǎn))。

Step 3 提信息、找主旨

在分析好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)后，要按照文章的段落找出每一段的主旨句，并圈出一些能體現(xiàn)段落大意的關(guān)鍵詞。說(shuō)明文和議論文的主旨句多在段首或段尾，但也有位于段中或無(wú)主旨句的情況。另外，文章的每一段也可以按主旨信息、重要信息、次要信息和冗余信息來(lái)劃分。在提取信息時(shí)，要忽略冗余信息，也就是與主旨無(wú)關(guān)的一些細(xì)節(jié)信息。

Step 4 擬草稿、巧概括

在找出文章的主旨信息和重要信息后，考生須迅速擬定草稿。方法是先逐句分析找出段落主旨句，然后對(duì)這些句子在不改變?cè)獾幕A(chǔ)上進(jìn)行高度概括、同義替換或重構(gòu)句式。最后，還要注意各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。

Step 5 再通讀、細(xì)謄寫(xiě)

考生在擬好概要寫(xiě)作的草稿后，首先要通讀一遍，根據(jù)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)修正所寫(xiě)的概要中可能出現(xiàn)的一些諸如拼寫(xiě)、時(shí)態(tài)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、連接詞等方面的錯(cuò)誤。其次，根據(jù)文章的要義，核實(shí)一下所寫(xiě)的要點(diǎn)是否齊全。最后，把草稿清晰、工整地謄寫(xiě)在答題紙上。

五、寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing.However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.

In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way for a long time.Henry Ⅳ, King of France, was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.

Though the belief in the merit (好處) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbour ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good for health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?

Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫學(xué)家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

本文是一篇議論文。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、論點(diǎn)明確，主要論述了從古至今人們對(duì)皮膚上污物的態(tài)度的變化。

Step 1 析體裁、明主旨

議論文通常包括論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和結(jié)論三部分，因此寫(xiě)議論文的概要之前，考生首先要找出主題句(the topic sentences)、支撐句(supporting sentences)和結(jié)論句(conclusion sentences)，其中最主要的是找準(zhǔn)主題句。

Step 2 析結(jié)構(gòu)、定要點(diǎn)

本文的論點(diǎn)為第一段，談?wù)搹墓胖两袢藗儗?duì)皮膚上污物的態(tài)度的變化。第二、三、四段為論據(jù)，本文沒(méi)有結(jié)論句。

Step 3 提信息、找主旨

利用議論文的段落主旨句多在段首或段尾的特征，找出各段的主旨句。然后，對(duì)這些句子在不改變?cè)x的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行高度概括、同義替換或重構(gòu)句式，使其符合原文的本意。

第一段指出：However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.

第二段指出：Dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.

第三段指出：Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbour ever since 18th century.

第四段指出：Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.

Step 4 擬草稿、巧概括

要點(diǎn)1：People have mixed opinions on dirt on our skin.

要點(diǎn)2：For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France,believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.

要點(diǎn)3：However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years later.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.

要 點(diǎn)4：Nevertheless, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help strengthen our immune system.

Step 5 再通讀、細(xì)謄寫(xiě)

【佳作賞析】

People have mixed opinions on dirt on our skin.(要點(diǎn)1：論點(diǎn)) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要點(diǎn)2：論據(jù)1) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years later.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.(要點(diǎn)3：論據(jù)2) Nevertheless, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help strengthen our immune system.(要點(diǎn)4：論據(jù)3)

六、模擬導(dǎo)練

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

These days, our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However, it is better for people to take their time and live their lives at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.

The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrong things in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they cannot make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes, “Haste makes waste.” We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.

Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example, taking a train to someplace certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends.Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our life.

Finally, slower life pace provides better healthy conditions for us.As is known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them.Being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.According to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.

In short, working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced.However, much stress can't bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace.

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