吳金龍

【真題再現(xiàn)】

假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Daniel計劃今年暑假來江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的情況，以便選擇度假地點，請根據(jù)下面提供的關鍵詞，給他寫一封郵件，先介紹城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點和不同點，然后說說你自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說明理由。

城市生活：supermarket ，restaurant， apartment， car， bus， cinema， club， park.

農(nóng)村生活：vegetable， rice， motorbike， bicycle， visiting， neighbors.

Dear Daniel，

I am looking forward to meeting you！

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Best wishes！

Li Hua

【佳作欣賞】

Dear Daniel，

I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. I am looking forward to meeting you！

People's life is getting better and better both in the city and in the country. They pay more and more attention to keeping healthy. However， there are some similarities and differences between city life and country life.

In the city people like to buy things that they need in the supermarkets. They can eat at home or in the restaurants. They live in beautiful apartments. They often go to the cinemas， clubs or parks to relax themselves after work. On weekends they often go for a car driving or travel around by bus. Living in the city is really cool.

In the country， People are usually very busy. They grow vegetables and rice in the fields. They live in big houses， They ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. They often visit their neighbors when they are free. They live a happy life.

I like living in the city better. Because I can go to the libraries， bookstores and museums， and I can learn a lot about the world.

Best wishes！

Li Hua

【作文點評】

本篇書信作文緊扣介紹城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點和不同點這一主題，結合給出的關鍵詞，適當發(fā)揮，談了自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說明了原因。文章結構整齊，層次分明，語言流暢，表述清晰，運用了一般現(xiàn)在時、現(xiàn)在進行時和一般將來時多種時態(tài)，且運用了一些比較級的句型和情態(tài)動詞，短語和一些復合句也運用得當，是一篇值得我們學習的書信佳作。

書信作文應注意的事項建議：

1. 注意書信格式，內(nèi)容要緊扣主題。

2. 根據(jù)關鍵字搜集相關信息，可適當發(fā)揮，但不能偏離主題。

3. 列提綱，劃分段落，做到層次分明，結構嚴謹，條理清晰。

4. 將所要書寫的內(nèi)容補充完整。

5. 仔細檢查，找出拼寫、語法、時態(tài)、句型錯誤，并改正。

6. 注意書寫，認真規(guī)范的抄寫在試卷上。

（作者單位：山東省五蓮縣許孟鎮(zhèn)初級中學）