As we see， all kinds of inventions have brought our lives comfortable and easy. The world is changing and becoming more colorful. So I want to be an inventor like Edison. Now， Im still a middle school student. Im trying my best to work hard at all my lessons， especially physical， math and science. When I meet questions at school， I always ask my teachers and my classmates for help. On the other hand， Ill read books about inventions to make me cleverer. Im interested in physical. Maybe Ill invent some electric machines. Theyll help us work easily and quickly.

Although I will face lots of challenges along the way， I think nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it. I believe my dream must come true.

簡評：本文層次分明，結構緊湊，運用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時講述了自己的夢想，詳細地介紹了自己未來實現(xiàn)發(fā)明家的愿望，正在努力學習，功夫不負有心人，相信王爍同學的愿望一定會實現(xiàn)！

（指導教師：李池紅）