張寶香
“You want to be teacher,do you?Dont be silly. Teachers are poorly paid. And they have no power to do what they wish to.” My friend was puzzled when I told her I wanted to be a teacher in the future. Im not silly and Ill tell him why.
Im determined to be a teacher because I have been admiring teachers very much since I was young. They are like angels,kind and respectable. They are learned,helpful and encouraging.
Im determined to be a teacher because teachers have the greatest power in the world. They lead us to success. They fan sparks of intelligence just as the God gave the breath of life into a clay figures nostrils.
Im determined to be a teacher because I can keep myself young for ever and I can learn,change and grow with my students.
Im determined to be a teacher because I like the living style of teachers,simple but free. The two vacations will offer me an opportunity for writing,doing research work and anything I like.
Ill try my best to be a qualified teacher. Firstly,Ill study hard to increase my knowledge and learn teaching skills. Secondly,Ill love my students and take pride in my profession. Thirdly,Ill trust them,respect them and understand them. I want to be their good friend and treat them equally.
I believe that teaching is the most honorable job in the world. Ill take it as my life-long career. I will never regret my decision. I think my wish will come true. Do you think so?
教師點(diǎn)評(píng):
本文以附加疑問句開頭,突出了主題。文章層次清楚,用詞得當(dāng),銜接緊湊,說(shuō)服力強(qiáng)。這是一篇成功的習(xí)作。
(點(diǎn)評(píng)教師:石繼忠)
中學(xué)英語(yǔ)園地·教學(xué)指導(dǎo)版2008年6期