The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. My family often do many interesting things. We often stick the character “Fu” on doors and windows to bring good luck. We also make a lot of dumplings, and guess what? We hide a coin in some of them! Eating those dumplings is a secret wish for good luck of the new year.
六(2)班 朱煜睿
The Spring Festival is the beginning of the lunar year. I always wear new clothes from head to toe. It symbolizes(象征) a new start and fresh hopes for the new year. I can get some red packets from my grandparents and relatives, wishing me good luck in the coming year. I enjoy and love the festival so much.
六(2)班 李秦羽
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China. We clean the house and put red couplets on the gate. We set off firecrackers to drive away the legendary monster “Nian”. We visit our relatives and friends with the greetings(問候) of “Happy New Year”. We can also get lucky money. I like the Spring Festival.
六(3)班 張宸睿
Last Spring Festival,I did spring cleaning with my parents. We got together and had a big dinner. I ate spring rolls, sweet dumplings, and steamed fish. Later, we sat in the living room and watched the Spring Festival Gala. We all had a good time.
六(4)班 方昱蘇
指導(dǎo)老師點(diǎn)評
小作者們筆下的春節(jié)“年味十足”。前三位同學(xué)運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)講述自己春節(jié)的趣事。朱煜睿主要描述了兩件趣事——貼“?!弊趾桶溩?;李秦羽把“穿新衣”這件事描述得十分具體、形象;張宸睿寫到了“放鞭炮趕年獸”的民俗傳統(tǒng)。而方昱蘇用一般過去時(shí)回憶了去年春節(jié)。學(xué)生在寫作此類主題的文章時(shí),既可以突出節(jié)日特色,寫出春節(jié)喜慶的氛圍;又可以捕捉細(xì)節(jié),表現(xiàn)闔家團(tuán)圓的溫馨。