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文體感知

演講，是指在特定的時(shí)空環(huán)境中，公開向聽眾傳遞信息，表述見解，闡明事理，抒發(fā)感情，以達(dá)到感召聽眾的目的。根據(jù)不同的目的，演講的風(fēng)格也不同。通常來(lái)講，演講有介紹類、說(shuō)服類、激勵(lì)類、教育類等。一場(chǎng)富有吸引力的演講，不僅可以生動(dòng)地反映生活，揭示真理，同時(shí)還能引起人們共鳴，培養(yǎng)人們美好的道德情操，促進(jìn)人們奮發(fā)向上，給人以強(qiáng)烈的美的感受。而關(guān)于音樂(lè)影響力的演講，要著重講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷和感受，注重語(yǔ)言樸實(shí)，感情真實(shí)，多站在聽眾的角度考慮，引起他們的共鳴。

一、基本框架

二、素材積累

第一段：開場(chǎng)白（開門見山，略寫）

1. Good morning/afternoon/evening， ladies and gentleman. My name is...， a middleschool student from... Im honored to be here to give a talk on music.

2. Hello， everyone！ My name is...， a middle school student from... Im glad to standhere to share my experience with music.

第二段：正文（具體經(jīng)歷，寫出起伏，詳寫）

1. experience something unpleasant 經(jīng)歷一些不愉快的事情

2. suffer （from）... 遭受……

3. be faced with 面臨

4. be in trouble with... 陷入……的麻煩

5. feel down/depressed/powerless/desperate 感到沮喪/壓抑/無(wú)力/絕望

6. empowering lyrics and uplifting messages 有力的歌詞和振奮人心的啟示

7. fuel ones determination 點(diǎn)燃某人的決心

8. provide sb with a healthy emotional outlet 給某人提供一個(gè)健康的情緒出口

9. soothing power 安撫的力量

10. slow and soft beat 舒緩的節(jié)奏

11. fast/uplifting tempo 歡快的節(jié)奏

12. harmonic/melodious chorus 悅耳的和聲

13. catchy/penetrating/magnetic voice 悅耳動(dòng)聽的/有穿透力的/有磁性的嗓音

14. Many empty spaces are specially designed in traditional Chinese music. 中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)音樂(lè)很講究留白。

15.Empty space allows listeners to come into the work， having a dialogue with theplayer and composer. 留白讓聽眾進(jìn)入作品，和表演者、創(chuàng)作者進(jìn)行對(duì)話。

16. The sounds and pauses of pipa combine to make a poetry of sound. 琵琶的聲音和停頓結(jié)合起來(lái)，創(chuàng)造出一首聲音的詩(shī)。

17. Listeners can experience the power and beauty of music. 聽眾能感受到音樂(lè)的力量和美。

18. Music has the power to ignite a fire within me， reminding me of my goals and providingthe strength to persevere. 音樂(lè)給了我力量，點(diǎn)燃我內(nèi)心的激情，提醒我自己的目標(biāo)，給我堅(jiān)持下去的力量。

19. It has also provided me with a sense of solace during difficult times， offering comfortand support when I needed it the most. 它也在我困難時(shí)給予我安慰，在我最需要它的時(shí)候安慰我、支持我。

20. Music has been a constant companion， helping me navigate through lifes ups anddowns. 音樂(lè)是我忠實(shí)的伙伴，幫助我渡過(guò)人生的起起伏伏。

21. I have found solace and a means of self?expression through playing and composingmusic. It allows me to channel my emotions and thoughts into melodies and lyrics， creatinga form of outlet. 我通過(guò)演奏、創(chuàng)作音樂(lè)找到了安慰和自我表達(dá)的方式。它讓我把自己的情感和思想轉(zhuǎn)化為曲調(diào)和歌詞，成為我一種宣泄的方式。

22. It has also allowed me to explore different genres and experiment with various instruments，expanding my musical repertoire and enhancing my skills. 它也讓我去探索不同的音樂(lè)類型，實(shí)踐不同的樂(lè)器，拓展自己的曲目，提升演奏技巧。

第三段：結(jié)尾（現(xiàn)狀，略寫）

1. Now， music has had a profound impact on me， motivating my personal development.如今，音樂(lè)已經(jīng)對(duì)我產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響，激勵(lì)著我的個(gè)人發(fā)展。

2. Music is a powerful language that continues to shape my life in a meaningful way.音樂(lè)是一種有力的語(yǔ)言，持續(xù)以一種有意義的方式塑造著我的生活。

3. Whether I＇m seeking relief， inspiration， or simply a means of self?expression， musichas always been there， guiding me through the highs and lows of life. 無(wú)論我是尋求慰藉、靈感，還是一種自我表達(dá)方式，音樂(lè)總在那里，引導(dǎo)著我渡過(guò)人生的起起落落。

情境呈現(xiàn)

假定你是李華，你校正在舉辦一年一度的音樂(lè)節(jié)，活動(dòng)之一是以“Music and me”為主題的演講。你準(zhǔn)備報(bào)名參加，請(qǐng)你寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 自我介紹；

2. 你的音樂(lè)故事；

3. 你的感悟。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Good morning， ladies and gentlemen，

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Thank you for your listening！

Step 1 審題

Step 2 詞塊積累

1. share sth with sb 和某人分享某事

2. experience ups and downs 經(jīng)歷人生的起伏

3. be immersed in... 沉浸在……

4. turn to 求助于

5. go rusty 生疏

6. break up with sb 和某人鬧掰

Step 3 關(guān)鍵句

1. I was deeply hurt， feeling a sense of betrayal. 我深受傷害，有一種被背叛的感覺。

2. Music has had a profound impact on my life， shaping my emotions， memories andeven my personal growth. 音樂(lè)對(duì)我的生活有著深遠(yuǎn)的影響，它塑造了我的情感、記憶，甚至我的個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)。

3. The catchy melodies and positive lyrics can energize me and help me see thebrighter side of things. 動(dòng)人的樂(lè)曲和積極的歌詞讓我精神振奮，幫助我看到事情陽(yáng)光的一面。

4. Whenever I feel down or stressed， I will turn to my favorite upbeat songs to instantlyboost my spirits. 每當(dāng)我感到沮喪或者有壓力時(shí)，我就去聽我最喜歡的激昂的音樂(lè)來(lái)提神。

5. It never fails to refresh me， encouraging me to calmly face whatever life has instore. 它總是能讓我神清氣爽，讓我從容面對(duì)生活中的一切。

Step 4 連句成篇

【佳作欣賞】

Good morning， ladies and gentlemen，

I＇m a middle school student from Hangzhou. It＇s my honor to stand here to share mystory with music.

One year ago， I broke up with my best friend. I was so hurt that I found no way out.One day， quite by accident， I heard a song named Change by Taylor Swift. The catchy melodiesand positive lyrics immediately energized me， helping me see the brighter side ofthings.

Since then， whenever I feel down or stressed， I turn to my favorite upbeat songs. Theynever fail to refresh me， encouraging me to calmly face whatever life has in store.

Thank you for your listening！

小試牛刀

假定你是李華，你報(bào)名參加了學(xué)校即將舉行的英語(yǔ)演講比賽?，F(xiàn)在你準(zhǔn)備寫一篇演講稿，題目為“Music inspires me”，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 自我介紹；

2. 音樂(lè)對(duì)你的影響；

3. 你的心得。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Music inspires me

Good afternoon， ladies and gentlemen，

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Thank you for your listening！