王慧琴
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事理闡釋類說明文是一種以說明為主,闡明事理的概念、特點(diǎn)、演變、異同等的說明性文章。它著重于對(duì)客觀事物進(jìn)行介紹、解釋或分析,目的是幫助人們了解新的知識(shí)。此類文章通常以總分或總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行闡述。它在寫作手法上采用舉例子、做比較、分類別、析因果、列數(shù)字、做詮釋、打比方、下定義、列圖表、引用、假設(shè)、對(duì)比或類比等說明方法。此類語(yǔ)篇涉及科技、社會(huì)和文化生活等多個(gè)領(lǐng)域。高考主要考查學(xué)生準(zhǔn)確把握文章主旨以及理解長(zhǎng)難句的能力。
策略導(dǎo)航
(1)巧用彩色筆細(xì)品文章。借助彩色筆對(duì)文本中的不同部分做標(biāo)注。例如,用紫色筆標(biāo)注開頭句,用綠色筆標(biāo)注段落的主題句,用紅色筆標(biāo)注說明闡述的方法,用黃色筆標(biāo)注邏輯關(guān)系詞,用藍(lán)色筆標(biāo)注長(zhǎng)難句,等等。寫作時(shí),根據(jù)標(biāo)注的情況,進(jìn)行仿寫。
(2)利用“PRSR原則”構(gòu)建文本框架,搭建讀寫支架?!癙RSR原則”是事理闡釋類說明文采用的一種寫作視角,P為Phenomenon(現(xiàn)象),R為Reason(原因),S為Solution(措施),R為Result(結(jié)果),但有的文章并未完全涵蓋PRSR四種要素。在閱讀事理闡釋類說明文時(shí),利用“PRSR原則”有助于我們梳理文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和邏輯關(guān)系。在進(jìn)行事理闡釋類說明文寫作時(shí),我們可以利用“PRSR原則”對(duì)文章進(jìn)行布局,同時(shí)還要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。
素材導(dǎo)背
一、有關(guān)健康生活話題的高頻詞匯
benefit利益;好處
beneficial有好處的
comfortable舒服的;安逸的
uncomfortable不舒服的
harm傷害
necessary必需的;必要的
jog慢跑
yoga瑜伽
aerobics有氧運(yùn)動(dòng)
strengthen增強(qiáng)
strong強(qiáng)壯的
balance平衡;天平
fat脂肪;胖的;肥的
obesity肥胖;肥胖癥
slim苗條的
health健康;衛(wèi)生
energetic精力旺盛的
lifestyle生活方式
mental精神的;腦力的
physical 身體的;體力的
nutrition營(yíng)養(yǎng);滋養(yǎng)
habit習(xí)慣;習(xí)性
overweight太胖的;超重的
diet飲食
二、高頻短語(yǔ)
a healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式
be in good health身體健康
be/go on a diet節(jié)食
put on/gain weight增加體重
cut down/lose weight減輕體重
be beneficial to/be good for/do good to對(duì)……有益
be harmful to/be bad for/do harm to 對(duì)……有害
be high/low in含……高/低
be rich in富含
build up ones body/strength 增強(qiáng)某人的體質(zhì)
develop a healthy eating habit 養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣
keep a balanced/healthy diet 保持均衡/健康的飲食
have meals on time按時(shí)吃飯
be particular about food挑食
convenience food便利食品
fast food快餐
takeaway food外賣食品
junk food垃圾食品
eat snacks吃零食
take regular exercise定期鍛煉
take an active part in physical exercise 積極參加體育鍛煉
keep fit/healthy/slim保持健康/苗條
stay up熬夜
break down(身體)垮掉
physical and mental health身心健康
三、高頻句式
1. As far as I’m concerned, we should develop a healthy eating habit to build up our strength. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.我認(rèn)為,我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣來增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。只有這樣我們才能有足夠的精力學(xué)習(xí)。
2. The better eating habits we get into,the healthier our life will become. 我們?cè)绞丘B(yǎng)成良好的飲食習(xí)慣,我們的生活就會(huì)變得越健康。
3. Not only does exercise improve our health but also it makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency. 鍛煉不僅改善我們的健康狀況,而且使我們精神愉悅并提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。
4. Eating in a healthy way and exer?cising regularly are the key to keepinghealthy.健康飲食和經(jīng)常運(yùn)動(dòng)是保持健康的關(guān)鍵。
案例導(dǎo)練
Keep a healthy weight
The key to keeping a healthy weight is regular exercise and good eating habits. Some?people think exercise and good eating habits require lots of effort or planning. But thats nottrue. In fact, the best way to work them into our lives is to make small changes.
Teens should get 60 minutes or more of physical activity a day. Note the word“activity”. As long as you’re getting your body moving, it doesn’t mean doing complicatedexercises or hitting the gym every day. All that matters is that each week you get the rightbalance of activities, including aerobics (有氧運(yùn)動(dòng)), strength building, and flexibilityexercise. Make exercise a habit by arranging some time every day.
On days when you have soccer practice or an aerobics class, you may have no troubleexercising for an hour or more. But most of us are busy, and 60 minutes a day of exerciseseems like a lot of time. The good news is that it’s OK to divide it into shorter“exercisebreaks”throughout the day.
Just as you might have a healthy snack to stop yourself from getting hungry, exercisesnacks can keep energy levels high. So get up 15 minutes earlier and do some yoga or otherstretching activities. Fast walk or jog for 15 minutes at lunch. Do the same thing after school—or walk or bike home. Add to that climbing the stairs, taking gym class, and walkingbetween classes during the day, and you’ve probably reached your 60 minutes.
Eating well doesn’t mean dieting over and over again. In fact, studies have shown thatdieting often doesn’t work. The best way to keep a healthy weight is to make healthy foodchoices daily. For some of us, that means changing our mindset about food.
Use your creativity to come up with ways to fit exercise and healthy eating habits intoyour life in a way that works for you. We’re all different. Your best friend might prefer toschedule some gym time while you’d rather take your dog to the park. Knowing what’s rightfor you will make it a lot easier to do!
一、閱讀自測(cè)
Gist
1. What is the main idea of paragraph 1?
A. The key to having regular exercise.
B. The key to forming good eating habits.
C. The key to keeping a healthy weight.
D. The key to making small changes.
Detail
2. What is important for keeping 60 minutes a day of exercise?
A. Doing difficult exercises.
B. Going to the gym every day.
C. Keeping the body moving all the time.
D. Dividing it into shorter“exercise breaks”.
Vocabulary
3. What does the underlined phrase“exercise snacks”probably mean in paragraph 4?
A. A new kind of exercise.
B. Shorter“exercise breaks”.
C. Food eaten before exercise.
D. Food eaten during exercise.
Inference
4. What can we learn about eating well to keep a healthy weight?
A. Eating well indicates we should diet repeatedly.
B. Dieting helps us to keep a healthy weight.
C. To make healthy food choices daily often works well.
D. To change our attitude towards food is critical for all of us.
二、語(yǔ)言汲取
(一)有關(guān)健康生活話題的核心表達(dá)
1. 健康的生活方式
keep a healthy weight 保持健康的體重
take regular exercise 定期運(yùn)動(dòng)
good eating habits好的飲食習(xí)慣
make small changes做一些小的改變
physical activity體育活動(dòng)
get your body moving 讓你的身體動(dòng)起來
do complicated exercises做復(fù)雜的鍛煉
hit the gym去健身房
get up 15 minutes earlier 早起15分鐘
keep fit / keep healthy 保持健康
2. 體育鍛煉
have soccer practice 進(jìn)行足球訓(xùn)練
have an aerobics class上有氧運(yùn)動(dòng)課
strength building力量訓(xùn)練
flexibility exercise柔韌性訓(xùn)練
do some yoga 做瑜伽
do other stretching activities 做其他的拉伸運(yùn)動(dòng)
fast walk 快走
jogging 慢跑
climb the stairs 爬樓梯
take the gym class 上體育課
walk between classes 課間散步
3. 健康飲食
diet日常飲食;節(jié)食
make healthy food choices選擇健康飲食
change our mindset about food改變我們對(duì)食物的觀念
have a healthy snack吃健康的零食
get hungry 挨餓
4. 其他
the key to ……的關(guān)鍵
require lots of effort需要付出很多努力
mean doing 意味著……
as long as 只要
include 包括
divide into 把……分成
stop...from 阻止……做……
over and over again反復(fù)地
come up with 想出
fit...into 適合;使……相適應(yīng)
prefer to更喜歡
schedule 計(jì)劃;安排
(二)精彩表達(dá)
1. Eating well doesn’t mean dieting over and over again.健康飲食并不意味著反復(fù)地節(jié)食。
Knowing what’s right for you will make it a lot easier to do! 知道什么是適合你的,將會(huì)讓它做起來更容易!
這兩個(gè)句子都是用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞V?ing 形式作主語(yǔ),句式簡(jiǎn)潔。
2. The good news is that its OK to divide it into shorter“exercise breaks”throughoutthe day.好消息是,可以在全天把它分成更短的“鍛煉時(shí)間”。
本句中,that引導(dǎo)的是表語(yǔ)從句,在表語(yǔ)從句中,it 作形式主語(yǔ),to divide it intoshorter“exercise breaks”throughout the day 是真正的主語(yǔ),句子的主干為The goodnews? is...。
3.As long as youre getting your body moving, it doesn’t mean doing complicatedexercises or hitting the gym every day.只要你的身體在運(yùn)動(dòng),這并不意味著要做復(fù)雜的鍛煉或每天去健身房。
本句中,as long as 意為“只要”,引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句;it doesn’t meandoing complicated exercises or hitting the gym every day 為主句部分,mean doing 意為“意味著要做……”。
三、句式仿寫
1. 運(yùn)動(dòng)鍛煉是塑造身材最簡(jiǎn)單、最便宜的方式。
_____________________________________________(exercise) is the easiest and cheapest way of?shaping our figure.
2. 好消息是,越來越多的人關(guān)注健康的生活方式。
_____________________________________________more and more people are concerned about the healthy lifestyle.
3. 青少年只要定期鍛煉和保持良好的飲食習(xí)慣,就能保持健康的體重。, they will keep a healthy weight.
四、寫作實(shí)踐
隨著生活水平的提高,青少年的肥胖現(xiàn)象較為普遍,這引起了廣泛的關(guān)注。你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在進(jìn)行以“Keep a healthy weight”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),寫一篇征文。
1. 加強(qiáng)鍛煉;
2. 合理飲食。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 至少需要使用兩個(gè)本文中解析過的句式。
Keep a healthy weight
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評(píng)價(jià)導(dǎo)思
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A self?assessment checklist for my reading
1. 閱讀本文前,我認(rèn)真了解了事理闡釋類說明文的文體知識(shí)?!?Yes □ No
2. 在閱讀過程中,我會(huì)用“PRSR 原則”梳理文章?!?Yes □ No
3. 這篇文章用了__________的說明方法?!?舉例子□ 做比較□ 下定義
4. 讀完這篇文章后,我會(huì)嘗試著養(yǎng)成健康的生活方式。□ Yes □ No
5. 讀完這篇文章后,我會(huì)花費(fèi)__________的時(shí)間來讀完一篇大約350 詞的事理闡釋類說明文。
□ 5分鐘 □ 7分鐘 □ 9分鐘 □ 其他
6. 本次讀寫活動(dòng)后,我會(huì)科學(xué)地管理體重,保持健康。□ Yes □ No
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