肖瑩
【注意事項(xiàng)】
人物介紹,即介紹某一個(gè)特定的人物。在寫人物介紹類書面表達(dá)時(shí),同學(xué)們要注意以下事項(xiàng):
(1)人稱和時(shí)態(tài):對(duì)于人物介紹類寫作,若是側(cè)重對(duì)他人的介紹,則以第三人稱為主;若是側(cè)重自我介紹,則以第一人稱為主。若是介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、性格、特長(zhǎng)以及評(píng)價(jià),多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài);若是介紹人物出生時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),回憶過(guò)去經(jīng)歷或事跡等,常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
(2)寫作內(nèi)容:人物介紹類文章通常涉及人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、職業(yè)、愛(ài)好、性格、學(xué)歷、經(jīng)歷、評(píng)價(jià)等內(nèi)容。當(dāng)然,寫作時(shí)不可面面俱到,要注意嚴(yán)格按照題目的寫作要求來(lái)寫,做到要點(diǎn)齊全,重點(diǎn)突出,詳略得當(dāng),條理分明。
【常用詞匯與句型】
1. 常用詞匯
①描寫人物外貌:tall(高的),slim(苗條的),strong(強(qiáng)壯的),beautiful(美麗的), at- tractive(迷人的),handsome(帥氣的)等。
②描寫人物性格品質(zhì):kind(善良的), friendly(友好的),outgoing(開朗的),polite(有禮貌的),patient(有耐心的),confident(自信的),considerate(體貼的),hard-working(努力工作的),strict(嚴(yán)厲的)等。
③描寫人物興趣愛(ài)好:be fond of(喜歡),be good at(擅長(zhǎng)),be interested in(對(duì)……感興趣),be keen on(熱衷于),be friendly to(對(duì)……友好),is responsible for(對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé)),participate in(參加)等。
2.常用句型
① She/He was born in a rich/poor family.(她/他出生在一個(gè)富裕/貧困家庭。)
② She/He always treats others with great politeness and patience.(她/他對(duì)待別人總是很有禮貌和耐心。)
③He/She is /happy/ pleased/willing to lend a helping hand to ...(他/她樂(lè)意向……伸出援手。)
④What she/he impressed me is...(她/他給我留下深刻印象的是……)
⑤ There is no doubt that he/she is a wor- thy person for us to praise and learn from.(毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),他/她是一個(gè)值得我們贊揚(yáng)和學(xué)習(xí)的人。)
⑦ This is him/her, deserving our respect and compliment.(這就是他/她,值得我們尊重和贊美。)
【真題展示】
(2021年.江蘇連云港中考卷)我市第八屆“最美港城人”系列評(píng)選活動(dòng)正在進(jìn)行,你班決定推薦李華同學(xué)參加其類別之一“最好志愿者”的評(píng)選,請(qǐng)你以“The Most Beautiful Volun-? teer ”為題,給校英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫一篇詞數(shù)不少于 80? 的短文,介紹李華,內(nèi)容包括:①品質(zhì):禮貌、善良、富有耐心;②事跡:樂(lè)于幫助老師和同學(xué);周末積極參加各類公益活動(dòng),如去街道打掃衛(wèi)生……。③你的評(píng)價(jià):至少兩條。
解析:仔細(xì)審讀題目可知,這是一篇典型的介紹人物的文章。它要求以“The Most Beautiful Volunteer ”為題,從品質(zhì)、事跡這兩個(gè)方面著重介紹“李華”這一人物,并寫出至少兩條個(gè)人評(píng)價(jià),用來(lái)推薦李華參加“最美志愿者”。因?yàn)樵摃姹磉_(dá)是介紹他人,所以人稱應(yīng)以第三人稱為主,時(shí)態(tài)則以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。
【參考范文】
The Most Beautiful VolunteerLi Hua is our classmate, who is a consider- ate and friendly student. He always treats others with great politeness and patience.
Whenever we are in trouble, he is willing to lend a helping hand to us. At school, he is a teacher s helpful assistant. He takes an active part? in? different? kinds? of? activities? on? week- ends,? such? as? cleaning the? streets? and tending flowers and plants. What s more, he also often plays? a? visit? to? the? nursing? home? and? helps the elderly to tidy up their rooms.
As a student, Li Hua does his best to con- tribute a lot to society and is responsible for his duty. There is no doubt that he is a worthy per- son for us to praise and learn from. We think he is qualified for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.