When I was a little boy， my mum gave me a bike.

It is red and black.

I can ride my bike very well.

This summer， I rode to the Tianmu Lake.

When I fell to the ground， I was so upset.

But I told myself， “Yes， I can.”

I think I can ride better and better.

指導(dǎo)老師 張敏：

學(xué)生們善于抓住自己的特長(zhǎng)進(jìn)行描述，情感細(xì)膩真摯， 語言富有童趣。讀了之后，小作者這個(gè)人物形象便活靈活現(xiàn)了。