廣東 鄢佳梅

電影《奪冠》講述的是中國女排從1981年首奪世界冠軍到2016年拿下第九個世界冠軍的歷史，詮釋了幾代女排人歷經(jīng)浮沉卻始終不屈不撓、不斷拼搏的傳奇經(jīng)歷。 “l(fā)eap”一詞既很好地捕捉了中國女排姑娘們在賽場上敏捷的身影，又隱含了中國女排在各種賽事中取得的一次次飛躍進步。

題材娛樂體裁說明文文章詞數(shù) 難度 建議用時351 ★★ 6 分鐘

Since their first championship in 1981,China's women's national volleyball team has been the pride of the country. When they play well, people cheer in their seats at the arena and in their homes all around the country. But few of these fans know how hard the players work to make it look so easy.

Directed by renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan, Leap, hit Chinese mainland cinemas on September 25th, 2020, smashing box office records on its opening day. The film is a cinematic depiction of the multigenerational struggle of the Chinese women's volleyball team to win glory for the nation,providing a more immersive and lively experience to recreate the Chinese women's volleyball team's Olympic victories between the 1980s and 2010s. It shows several generations of volleyball players and their journey to becoming an international powerhouse. Facing tough rivals like Brazil and the Netherlands,China's ladies have to train hard and live a“dim” daily life of never-ending blocking and spiking practice. They refuse to quit, however,working even after the stadium lights have gone out and pushing themselves through injuries.

This touching story also features a starstudded cast. One of China's most iconic screen actors, Gong Li, stars as former volleyball legend Lang Ping. Lang, nicknamed “the Iron Hammer”, is the first person in volleyball to win Olympic titles both as a player in the 1984 Los Angeles Olympics and as a coach in the 2016 Rio Olympics. It's Gong's first time acting in a sports film. In an earlier interview, Gong revealed that she had visited the training base of the China women's volleyball team to observe and study professionals, making her more prepared for her role as the sports legend Lang Ping.

Huang Bo acts as another famous coach who is also devoted to Chinese women's volleyball. Many volleyball players also appear. Interestingly, Lang's daughter, the United States-born Bai Lang, stars as her mother in the character's early years.

The film has scooped 9.3 points out of 10 on Maoyan, the country's largest online ticketing service. Moreover, what impresses and touches the fans most is the spirit of the women players together with the life-true performance of the cast.

Language Study

Ⅰ. Difficult sentence

In an earlier interview, Gong revealed that she had visited the training base of the China women's volleyball team to observe and study professionals, making her more prepared for her role as the sports legend Lang Ping.

譯文：早前接受采訪時，鞏俐透露，她曾到中國女排訓練基地觀察和研究專業(yè)球員，這讓她對自己扮演體育傳奇人物郎平這個角色更有準備。

分析：本句中that引導賓語從句；making her more prepared for...為現(xiàn)在分詞結構作結果狀語。

Ⅱ. Useful sentence patterns

1. Directed by renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan, Leap, hit Chinese mainland cinemas on September 25th, 2020, smashing box office records on its opening day.

譯文：由著名電影制作人陳可辛執(zhí)導的《奪冠》于2020年9月25日在中國大陸上映，上映當天打破了票房紀錄。

分析： 本句中的Directed by為過去分詞作定語，修飾Leap。

Practice：句式仿寫

著名導演李安執(zhí)導的電影《臥虎藏龍》（Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon）打破了以往的票房紀錄。

2. The film is a cinematic depiction of the multigenerational struggle of the Chinese women's volleyball team to win glory for the nation,providing a more immersive and lively experience to recreate the Chinese women's volleyball team's Olympic victories between the 1980s and 2010s.

譯文：這部影片以電影的形式描繪了幾代中國女排隊員為民族爭光的奮斗歷程，為再現(xiàn)20世紀80年代至21世紀初中國女排在奧運會上的勝利提供了更加身臨其境、生動和活潑的體驗。

分析：本句中的providing 為現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。

Practice：句式仿寫

這部影片以動漫的形式描繪了哪吒“逆天而行斗到底（fight against the heaven to the end）”的成長故事，為再現(xiàn)不一樣的傳統(tǒng)形象提供了更加風趣、幽默的體驗。

Reading Check

假定你是李華，你在看完電影《奪冠》后，深受觸動，想給《瘋狂英語》投稿，請依托本文介紹這部自己最喜歡的電影。

要求：

1. 文章200詞以內；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 至少有1個段落前要使用1個主題句。

寫作導引

本文是一篇影評寫作。文章一開始就介紹了這部影片制作的背景，然后依次介紹影片的類型、導演以及主要情節(jié)，接著提到了主演以及票房等。

由于題干限定了“依托本文”的寫作要求，因此，寫作時必須基于文章去提取和整合相關信息。

一、確定主題內容

Complete the following mind map with only one word for each blank.

二、整合話題表達

在整合相關的話題表達時需要對文中的相關句子進行整合、改寫，并根據(jù)內容的需要增補適當?shù)谋磉_。 同時，還應注意所提取的表達應反映出文章的主要信息。

(一)介紹電影導演、首映日和票房

Directed by the renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan, Leap, hit Chinese mainland cinemas on September 25th, 2020, smashing box office records on its opening day.

→Directed by the renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan and released on September 25th, 2020, the film Leap has smashed box office records on its opening day.

→The film Leap, which was directed by the renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan, was released on September 25th, 2020, smashing box office records on its opening day.

→The film Leap, which was directed by the renowned filmmaker Peter Ho-sun Chan, has become a hit in Chinese mainland cinemas and smashed box office records on its opening day.

(二)電影主要情節(jié)介紹

It shows several generations of volleyball players and their journey to becoming an international powerhouse.

→It depicts several generations of volleyball players who trained hard to compete with the tough rivals by practising never-ending blocking and spiking to win international victories.

→It is a depiction of several generations of volleyball players and their journey to winning international success.

(三)電影整體評論以及感受

1. What impresses and touches the fans most is the spirit of the women players together with the life-true performance of the cast.

2. The highlight of the film is the spirit of the women players together with the life-true performance of the cast.

3. The vivid characters and breathtaking visual effect together with the application of 3D technology create a 135-minute roller coaster,giving the audience a brand-new classic perspective into the traditional history.

三、搭建寫作支架

從形式上來看，本次寫作是書信的寫作；從內容上來看，本次寫作則是一篇典型的關于影評的說明文寫作。 根據(jù)提取的信息，語篇結構可定為“整體介紹電影導演、首映日和票房—電影主要情節(jié)介紹—電影整體評論以及感受”。 文章的框架如下：

Of all the movies that I have watched, ...is one the the remarkable sports films that I'd like to share and recommend. (整體過渡句)

Directed by..., the film... box office...its opening day. (電影導演、首映日和票房) It depicts...(plot) ...stars as...(演員) The vivid characters, the visual effect, the sound effect and the setting together recreate a unique scene, which has made a breathtaking splash to the fans.(電影整體評論) However, what impresses and touches...(電影內涵及感受)

四、連句成文，加工潤色

連句成文時可以根據(jù)實際對已經(jīng)提取的信息進行合并、精簡或刪除，并需要注意合理控制文章的篇幅，同時使用必要的連接手段，以使行文連貫。