江蘇省淮安市洪澤實(shí)驗(yàn)小學(xué)四（8）班 張晨桐

My hometown is HongZe.It is famous for HongZe Lake.The lake is one of the fresh water lakes in our country.It is big and wide.The water is so clean that plenty of fishes and lobsters live in it.You can also eat crabs every autumn.They are very delicious and appetizing.Welcome to my hometown.You will love it.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：小作者通過簡(jiǎn)潔的語言、生動(dòng)的描寫讓讀者很快了解到洪澤湖的水真清，洪澤湖的美食很多，讓人迫不及待想去她的家鄉(xiāng)看一看。