There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy， such as swimming， running and walking. However， the sport that I like most is playing basketball.

When I was eleven years old， I started to play basketball at school. I was all enough to joining the school basketball team. The basketball team leader invited me several times to join them. But my parents disagreed with me on the point. They thought it would cost me too much time. Going to a university was what they expected me to. They allowed me to play basketball as a hobby.

Now， I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can. The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

教師點(diǎn)評

這是一篇介紹自己喜歡的體育運(yùn)動的英語習(xí)作。全文中心突出，層次清晰，語句流暢。

作者在文章開頭列舉了幾種自己喜歡的體育運(yùn)動，但最喜歡的運(yùn)動是籃球。接下來又?jǐn)⑹隽俗约鹤孕【拖矚g籃球，后來為加入學(xué)?；@球隊(duì)和父母產(chǎn)生了分歧?，F(xiàn)在會盡可能多地看籃球比賽。文中巧妙地運(yùn)用了一些賓語從句、定語從句等。另外，such as、 however、 cost、 allow、 as... as one can等詞語也運(yùn)用得非常好。

美中不足的是，畫線部分出現(xiàn)了一點(diǎn)錯誤，應(yīng)改為join;結(jié)尾處有點(diǎn)突兀，若加上“How about you？”等句子會顯得更完美一些。

（指導(dǎo)教師：王俊杰）

作者簡介：

李可可，一位積極進(jìn)取的優(yōu)秀學(xué)生。他常說：“只有把學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)作樂趣，而不是累贅，才能學(xué)好。” 除了自己努力學(xué)習(xí)之外，他還樂于幫助其他同學(xué)搞好學(xué)習(xí)，并積極協(xié)助老師做好班務(wù)工作。他平時酷愛打籃球，還擅長足球、羽毛球等。他一直認(rèn)為“鳥兒只有學(xué)會飛翔才能振翅高飛，而我只有擁有足夠的知識才能立足社會”。