江蘇省淮安市洪澤實(shí)驗(yàn)小學(xué)五（8）班 晉 諾

My dream is to be a teacher.First I want to take my students to the zoo to see animals.I will teach them to love the animals.People and animals should live in harmony.Then We will go into the nature to study the plants and enjoy the air and sunshine.Finally I will take them to the library to read more books，not only Chinese，Maths and English.I will teach them how to learn and how to live.

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小作者通過(guò)描寫三個(gè)游覽過(guò)的地方，表達(dá)了自己的心聲，她呼吁大家關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物，走進(jìn)自然，學(xué)會(huì)生活和學(xué)習(xí)。全文條理清晰，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明生動(dòng)。