安徽省宣城市第八中學(xué)九年級（1）班 楊靜文

Ilive in Xuan cheng,AnhuiProvince.In the past ten years,I have seen much developmentherewith my own eyes.

Firstly,many high buildingshave been built on both sides of the road and public transportation has been improved greatly.Now people can travel more conveniently,so a great number of visitors come here every year.

Besides,there are a lot of delicious and special food in my city which attracted thousands of tourists around the world.Some typical ones are ningguowalnuts and shuidongjujube.

What’s more,the most famous thing for my hometown is xuan paper,which is well-known for its high quality,so my hometown is often called the home of wenfangsibao.Lots of people who like writing often come here to enjoy the art of making paper and buy some.

This is my hometown.I believe it’ll become more and more beautiful in the future.

【教師點評】

這是一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的習(xí)作。從整體來看，全文層次清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語句通順。細(xì)讀文章后，會對宣城的現(xiàn)狀、美食以及宣紙等有所了解。關(guān)聯(lián)詞語及復(fù)合句、被動語態(tài)的使用，體現(xiàn)了作者扎實的語言功底。但如能在結(jié)尾段加上表示歡迎內(nèi)容的句子，則文章定會更加完美。