張曦

于瑩 女，1992年畢業(yè)于山東師范大學(xué)，后一直從事初中英語的教學(xué)工作；中學(xué)高級(jí)教師、梁山縣優(yōu)秀教師，曾獲市級(jí)優(yōu)質(zhì)課一等獎(jiǎng)，連續(xù)多年所執(zhí)教的班級(jí)在中考中取得優(yōu)異成績；2012年12月在山東省英語競賽中榮獲優(yōu)秀指導(dǎo)教師稱號(hào)；曾先后在《中學(xué)生英語》《山東教育導(dǎo)報(bào)》《現(xiàn)代中學(xué)生》《初中生英語學(xué)習(xí)》《英語輔導(dǎo)報(bào)》《英語周報(bào)》《學(xué)生導(dǎo)報(bào)》《新課堂》等國家級(jí)、省級(jí)報(bào)刊上發(fā)表教學(xué)論文三十多篇。

How to Get Along Well with Others

In our daily life， we have to contact with people. Therefore， it is very important of① us to know how to get along with other people. To get along good② with others and win their friendships， we must obey strictly the following words：

To begin with， we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean. Lies will surely make people stay far from us in the long run. After all， honesty is the best policy. Second， we have to be humble enough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others respect， not to mention “friendship”. Finally， we should not be selfish. We should be kind for③ others instead. Meanwhile， we should learn how to show concern for others.

As long as we follow what is mentioned above， we will find that④ easy to get along well with others.

1. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

這篇習(xí)作想要表達(dá)誠實(shí)守信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。小作者表示，友善待人，關(guān)心別人，你就會(huì)贏得別人的尊重。其實(shí)，與人相處融洽是很容易的。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①of改為for。表示人的本性的形容詞（如clever，foolish，nice）用of；表示事物的形容詞（如easy，hard，difficult）用for。

②good改為well。修飾動(dòng)詞短語用副詞well。

③for改為to。be kind to意為“對(duì)……友善”。

④that改為it。做形式賓語用it。

3. 評(píng)分：

按中考英語作文滿分15分的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，本文修改前可得12分。