作者:安徽師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)高三(3)班 李函指導(dǎo)老師:任漢鼎
學(xué)生風(fēng)采展示板:Being Warm-Hearted
作者:安徽師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)高三(3)班 李函指導(dǎo)老師:任漢鼎
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to address[向……致辭]you. My English name is Isabella. I’m a high school student of 17. I have some good personality traits[特點(diǎn)], including being warm-hearted. So here comes my topic: Being warm-hearted.
Born a warm-hearted girl, I am always eager to help everyone in need so as to fulfill[實(shí)現(xiàn)]my dream of creating a beautiful world, bit by bit.
For example, when the horrible Wenchuan earthquake occurred, with thousands of souls gone, I was also in deep sorrow. I had donated as much as I could, including lots of my books and lovely toys, as well as a consolation[慰問(wèn)]letter with my good wishes to those unfortunate children. Later on, I received quite a few letters of thanks from them.
Besides, I always drop by to help a disabled girl in my neighborhood. Dropped out of school, she always stays at home all by herself, with no one looking her in the eye—except me. To cheer her up, I often share interesting stories with her, and try my best to teach her something I learnt at school. It’s so happy to see her face light up with a cheerful smile.
Now, you see, warm-heartedness does have some magical power. It can bring us friendship and happiness. Let’s pass it on and help more people in need! I believe, only by doing so can we create a beautiful world!
Thanks for listening!
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