How time flies！ I’m a little sad when I realize that I will graduate from junior high school in a few months. Luckily， I have some wonderful memories.

The person who impressed me most was my friend. My English was bad before and I felt unhappy about it. So I told it to a girl called Mary， who was good at English. She was willing to help me and made friends with me. She taught me some useful ways to learn English. We always communicated with each other in English. With her help， I have made great progress.

I will never forget her because she is the person who impressed me most. I gained not only the knowledge， but also the friendship from her.

河南農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 郭蒙蒙

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文章描寫了朋友對(duì)“我”的幫助，以及“我”最終收獲了知識(shí)和友誼，這些都成為“我”初中生活的美好回憶。第二段中，作者熟練運(yùn)用了定語從句“The person who impressed me most was my friend”，運(yùn)用be willing to句式表達(dá)了朋友樂于助人的品質(zhì)。