I have a remote control car.
My dad gives it to me on my birthday.
When I press the button, the car starts running.
It can go straight, and turn left or right.
It can sing a lot of songs.
It is really cute and cool.
江蘇省泰州市海陵學(xué)校三(2)班 楊宗軒
指導(dǎo)老師 胡 潔:
兩位同學(xué)能熟練運(yùn)用“I’m ... I have ...”等句型,語句通順,條理清晰。第一位同學(xué)從自身出發(fā),重點(diǎn)展示自己的興趣愛好;第二位同學(xué)則聚焦一輛遙控小汽車,凸顯對(duì)它的喜愛之情。