山東 李全忠

?情境呈現(xiàn)

你校英文報(bào)正在舉辦主題為“An amazing festival experience”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你最難忘的一次節(jié)日體驗(yàn)。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

An amazing festival experience

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?寫作導(dǎo)引

（一）文體感知

該寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇節(jié)日活動(dòng)類的記敘文。描寫節(jié)日時(shí)，內(nèi)容主要包括節(jié)日名稱、節(jié)日的重要性、節(jié)日日期以及活動(dòng)等。描寫慶祝節(jié)日的經(jīng)歷時(shí)，內(nèi)容主要描寫活動(dòng)和心情。寫作時(shí)要注意把記敘文的六要素交代清楚，包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果。

寫作時(shí)，主要人稱為第一人稱，主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

（二）文章結(jié)構(gòu)

（三）素材積累

1.節(jié)日名稱

the Spring Festival 春節(jié)

the Dragon Boat Festival 端午節(jié)

the MidAutumn Festival 中秋節(jié)

TombSweeping Day 清明節(jié)

the Double Ninth Festival 重陽(yáng)節(jié)

the Lantern Festival 元宵節(jié)

New Year's Day 元旦

National Day 國(guó)慶節(jié)

Teachers'Day 教師節(jié)

Thanksgiving Day 感恩節(jié)

April Fools'Day 愚人節(jié)

Mothers'Day 母親節(jié)

Fathers'Day 父親節(jié)

2.節(jié)日活動(dòng)

celebration 慶祝；慶?；顒?dòng)

feast 盛宴；宴會(huì)；(宗教的)節(jié)日

gettogether(親友等的)聚會(huì)

decorate 裝飾；修飾

treat 招待；款待

custom 習(xí)慣；風(fēng)俗

seasonal 節(jié)令性的；季節(jié)性的

energetic 充滿活力的；精力充沛的；積極的

worldwide 遍及全世界的；世界性的

gain 獲得；得到

admire贊賞；欽佩；仰慕

surround 包圍；圍繞

attract 吸引

3.高頻短語(yǔ)

be on holiday/vacation 度假

in memory of/in honor of 為紀(jì)念……

exchange gifts 交換禮物

dress up 打扮；裝扮

family reunion 家人團(tuán)圓

celebrate the festival 慶祝節(jié)日

on special occasions 在特殊場(chǎng)合

a display of fireworks 煙火表演

celebrate an anniversary 慶祝周年紀(jì)念日

have fun/have a good time 玩得開(kāi)心

look forward to 盼望

fall on 適逢

add to 增添

a wide range of 各種各樣的

enjoy great popularity 廣受歡迎

4.美句積累

（1）As a typical traditional festival, the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month.元宵節(jié)是一個(gè)典型的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，時(shí)間為農(nóng)歷正月十五。

（2）On that day, we eat tangyuan which represents the reunion, set off fireworks,enjoy lanterns and guess lantern riddles.在那一天，我們吃代表著團(tuán)聚的湯圓、放煙花、賞燈和猜燈謎。

（3）Apart from those,there are the Dragon Dance and other folk performances.此外，還有舞龍和其他民間表演。

（4）I was pleased that one of my friends in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival. 很高興，我的一個(gè)中國(guó)朋友邀請(qǐng)我和她一起度過(guò)了上一個(gè)春節(jié)。

（5）The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together, so we visited some of her families and relatives together. 中國(guó)的春節(jié)是中國(guó)家庭團(tuán)聚的特殊日子，所以我們一起拜訪了她的一些家人和親戚。

（6）Besides, we tried some traditional foods，watched the Dragon and Lion Dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.此外，我們?cè)嚦粤艘恍﹤鹘y(tǒng)食物，看了舞龍舞獅，并參加了一些其他的慶祝活動(dòng)，如廟會(huì)。

（7）Before the festival, people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses. 在節(jié)日前，人們忙著購(gòu)物和打掃房子。

（8）On the New Year's Eve,every family has a delicious feast.在除夕，每家都享用美味的大餐。

（9）When meeting,they send good wishes to each other by saying“Happy New Year!”.見(jiàn)面時(shí)，他們會(huì)說(shuō)“新年快樂(lè)！”，互相祝福。

（10）And people like to decorate their windows and doors using varieties of colorful papercuttings,which may be animals or flowers.人們喜歡用各種各樣的彩色剪紙裝飾他們的窗戶和門，這些剪紙可以是動(dòng)物或者花。

（11）As we watched TV,we made dumplings.我們一邊看電視，一邊包餃子。

（12）I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a deep impression on me.我不會(huì)忘記這個(gè)節(jié)日，因?yàn)樵S多精彩的時(shí)刻給我留下了深刻印象。

（13）This was my first time spending my holiday in China to celebrate the MidAutumn Festival,and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.這是我第一次在中國(guó)慶祝中秋節(jié)，這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一次愉快而令人興奮的經(jīng)歷。

【佳作欣賞】

An amazing festival experience

This was my first time spending the Lantern Festival with my classmates, which was an unforgettable experience for me. The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year. The custom of joyfully celebrating the Lantern Festival began as early as the Western Han Dynasty, and still has a great influence on Chinese people today.

During the festival, there were lanterns of various shapes and sizes hanging throughout streets, attracting countless visitors. Lantern shows were also organized, which created a festive atmosphere. What impressed me most was guessing riddles, as riddle guessing was interesting and full of wisdom.Many of the lanterns had riddles written on them and we couldn't wait to go to the owners to check our answers. At last, we received a little gift,extremely excited.

We also ate tangyuan, which tasted sweet and delicious. Tangyuan in Chinese has a pronunciation similar to tuanyuan and the round shape represents reunion, harmony and happiness.Besides,we set off fireworks and watched the Dragon Dance.

With my classmates, I spent an exciting and meaningful Lantern Festival. And I'm looking forward to the next festival.

?即時(shí)訓(xùn)練

假定你是來(lái)自英國(guó)的留學(xué)生Mike，去年你和中國(guó)的寄宿家庭一起過(guò)春節(jié)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，描述一下你的節(jié)日經(jīng)歷和感受。

1.節(jié)前——貼春聯(lián)，掛燈籠；

2.除夕——一家人吃團(tuán)圓飯，看電視；

3.你的感受。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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?評(píng)價(jià)導(dǎo)思

√Is the writing wellorganized?

√Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph?

√Does each paragraph include the necessary details?

√Does the writer describe his/her feelings and emotions?

√Does the writer use the V?ing form correctly in the writing?

√Are there any grammar,spelling,or punctuation errors?