山東 李全忠

?情境呈現

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Lily最近因肥胖問題而感到煩惱，發(fā)來郵件向你咨詢如何才能控制體重并保持健康。請你給她回一封郵件，提出相關建議。注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Lily,

Yours,

Li Hua

【佳作賞析】

Dear Lily,

I'm sorry to hear that you're depressed because of your weight.Here are my tips for you.

Above all,I suggest you do more sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.Besides,drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.Finally,if I were you,I would keep a healthy diet.Not only should you eat on time,but also you should eat less meat and more vegetables.

Best wishes to you!I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

?寫作指導

一、文體概述

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張并解決相關問題的信件。寫建議信時，要注意觀點合理，禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充分，具備合理性和說服力。建議信主要包括：

1.說明寫信目的；

2.提出建議與改進措施；

3.希望對方采納建議并表達自己的祝愿。

二、謀篇布局

三、常用語塊

ought to 應該

give/offer sb some advice 給某人一些建議

as follows 如下

have difficulty/trouble（in）doing sth 做 某事有困難

make use of 利用

ask sb for advice 向某人征求意見

make a plan 制訂計劃

find...helpful/useful 認為……有用

take...into account/consideration 把……考慮在內

get improved 得到改善

change for the better 有所改善

in my opinion/from my point of view 在我看來

carry out your plan step by step 一步步實施你的計劃

have/hold a positive attitude towards/to對……持有積極的態(tài)度

go out for a walk 去散步

be beneficial to 對……有益

communicate with 與……溝通

四、常用句式

●Paragraph 1 闡明寫信目的

1.I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to develop good learning habits.很高興收到你的來信，信中你詢問我關于如何養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣的建議。

2.Concerning your request,I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit.對于你的請求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建議。

3.My suggestions are as follows.以下是我的建議。

●Paragraph 2 提出建議

1.It is necessary for you to have a healthy diet.擁有健康的飲食對你來說很有必要。

2.The best way to improve your Chinese is to read many easy Chinese books.提升你的中文的最佳途徑就是去閱讀許多淺顯易懂的中文書籍。

3.There are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand Chinese better.有許多好看的、色彩多樣的圖片可以幫助我們更好地理解中文。

4.These books have many advantages.One of them is that we can find a variety of topics from the books,such as science,culture and history.這些書有許多優(yōu)點，其中之一就是我們可以從中找到各種各樣的話題，比如科學、文化和歷史。

5.You'd better take part in after class activities as much as possible,which will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve your learning.你最好盡可能多地參加課外活動，這不但會使你的校園生活變得豐富多彩，還能提升你的學習水平。

6.If I were you,I would try learning and singing Chinese songs.如果我是你，我會嘗試學習唱中文歌曲。

7.Eating less meat and more vegetables is also a good idea.少吃肉、多吃蔬菜也是一個不錯的主意。

8.Drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.喝足夠的水也是一個幫助你減肥的好辦法。

●Paragraph 3 表達祝愿

1.I hope you'll find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations useful.我希望你會覺得這些建議有用。

2.I hope that my suggestions will be of some value.我希望我的建議將會有價值。

3.I do hope to hear good news from you.我希望能聽到你的好消息。

五、常用銜接詞

firstly

first of all

above all

to begin with

in the first place

for one thing

secondly

besides

moreover

in addition

what's more

furthermore

worse still

to make matters worse

for another thing

finally

at last

in the end

last but not least

?即時強訓

Task 1

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文，請給他回一封郵件，給出你的建議。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

Task 2

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Mike 最近感覺學習壓力很大，寫信向你求助。請你用英文給他回一封信，就如何處理壓力給他一些建議。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mike,

Yours,

Li Hua