山東東明縣東方學(xué)校 李全忠
●題型解說
慰問信是向不幸者或失敗者表示安慰的信件。 這類信件要寫得簡單、誠摯,語言要得當(dāng),多用積極、樂觀的話語減輕對方的煩惱和痛苦,并鼓勵對方在日后的生活、工作和學(xué)習(xí)中要信心滿滿。 寫信的步驟一般為:
1. 自我介紹;
2. 表示慰問;
3. 力所能及的幫助;
4. 表示鼓勵。
●句型集錦
1. I'm sorry that you failed..., which brings you great suffering.
很遺憾得知你在……失敗了,并給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。
2. I just can not tell you how sorry I was to know that...
得知你……,你不知道我有多難過。
3. I felt so sorry indeed when I was informed of...
當(dāng)我得知……,我真的很難過。
4. I was shocked to hear the news that...
聽到……的消息我很震驚。
5. I wish there is something I could do to ease your pain.
我希望能做些什么來減輕你的痛苦。
6. I know there are no words that can comfort you now.
我知道現(xiàn)在無法用語言來安慰你。
7. Cheer up and fight against...
振作起來,和……做斗爭吧!
8. I hope you'll soon totally recover from...
我希望你很快就能從……中徹底痊愈。
9. Please don't hesitate to tell me if there is anything I can do.
如果需要我做什么,請直接告訴我。
10. Remember we won't be far away when you need any help.
記住,在你需要幫助的時候,我們就在你身邊。
11. I know there are no words that can be a comfort to you now, but you should realize that you are young with a promising future.
我知道現(xiàn)在無法用語言安慰你,但是你應(yīng)該意識到,你還很年輕,美好的未來在等著你。
12. I'm sure you will be restored to health soon.
我相信你很快就會康復(fù)。
●模板借鑒
I'm awfully sorry to hear thatFaced with such a(n)you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are moved to tears. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.(所能提供的幫助一). Besides,(所能提供的幫助二).
Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
●范文初成
Dear friends,
I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. Faced with such a rarely-seen natural disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you.I, as the chairman of Students' Union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere care for you. Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it will help you out as soon as possible. A better hometown is sure to be rebuilt soon.
Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won't be far away when you need any help!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
●小試牛刀
假定你是李華,你的美國朋友Anne得知自己身患肺癌 (lung cancer) 后處于極度的痛苦中。美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定,Anne每收到一封慰問信,就給她增加10美元的治療款。 請用英文給Anne寫一封慰問信,主要內(nèi)容包括:
1. 自我介紹;
2. 得知的情況;
3. 對她表示鼓勵和祝愿;
4. 打算為她做什么。
注意:
1. 開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);
2. 詞數(shù)100左右。
Dear Anne,
Yours,
Li Hua