江蘇省興化市大垛中心校 九年級(jí)（2）班 吳 俊

In the past，I hated exercise.My mother often advised me to do some sports.But I didn't agree.I thought it troubled to do sports every day and it was very difficult for me to do some sports.So I was very weak and I often got ill.I also got fatter and fatter.

I wanted to improve this situation.So I tried to do sports every day.It often took me one and a half hours to do sports every day.

As the saying goes“Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.”So my body is getting more and more healthy(healthier and healthier).

Now I love sports very much and I am very strong.I seldom have a cold and I am not fat any more.I am also much strength(stronger).

“Life lies in movement.”I hope everyone can learn from me.Do exercise every day.I believe everyone can be stronger and stronger.

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這是一篇介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)和健康的習(xí)作。

全文主題突出，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，詳略得當(dāng)。advised、agree、improve、seldom等詞語及賓語從句、并列句、諺語等的運(yùn)用，增強(qiáng)了文章的色彩。但如將文中的more and more healthy改為healthier and healthier，strength 改 為stronger，表達(dá)會(huì)更加恰當(dāng)。