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寫作任務(wù)1：現(xiàn)如今許多學(xué)生認(rèn)為青少年只要好好學(xué)習(xí)就行，做不做家務(wù)無所謂，你同意這種觀點(diǎn)么？為什么？請(qǐng)以 Must We Do Chores？為題寫一篇80字左右的作文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Must We Do Chores？

Many teenagers think that doing chores is a waste of their time.But I don't think so. Teenagers these days depend on their parents too much.I think we should help our parents with housework. Here are my reasons：

First， doing chores can help to develop children's independence. Next， it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. At last， it is not enough for teenagers to just get good grades at school. And anyway， study is very important， but it's not everything. As a saying goes，“No pains， no gains.”We must learn how to look after ourselves.

In a word， the earlier kids learn to be independent， the better it is for our future.Just do it！

教師點(diǎn)評(píng)：“青少年是否應(yīng)該幫忙做家務(wù)”是初中階段英語作文中比較熱門的話題之一。本文采用中考最流行的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段開宗明義，引出主題，并擺出自己的觀點(diǎn)“青少年應(yīng)該做家務(wù)”。第二段分四點(diǎn)來論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。第三段總結(jié)全文并有一定的升華和號(hào)召。除了結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)明確外，本文在邏輯詞的運(yùn)用上也非常豐富準(zhǔn)確，如First，next，at last，and anyway，in a word等。此外，本文的行文流暢，語法正確，能將平時(shí)所學(xué)的句型、詞組靈活應(yīng)用于作文之中，并有一定的諺語積累，足以見得該生扎實(shí)的語言功底。

寫作任務(wù)2：隨著人類文明的發(fā)展，人類活動(dòng)范圍的越來越大，取而代之的是野生動(dòng)物們的生存環(huán)境日益惡劣。請(qǐng)以Saving the Animals為題寫一篇80字左右的作文，談?wù)勀愕目捶āＷ魑闹姓?qǐng)包含以下內(nèi)容：1.野生動(dòng)物生存危機(jī)的原因。2我們應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)他們。

Saving the Animals

As we all know animals are our best friends. But nowadays， their numbers are getting smaller and smaller. Humans always cut down many trees and kill the animals，so their living places become smaller and smaller. And anyway， they don't have enough food to eat. As a result， their living environment becomes worse and worse.Some animals are even endangered in the world.So we must treat them well

.How can we protect them？We can go to school to teach children about the importance of saving the animals. People must stop killing them and cutting down the forests.We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more animals than now. As a saying goes，“Doing is better than saying.” Just do it！

教師點(diǎn)評(píng)：“動(dòng)物及環(huán)境保護(hù)”是全世界共同關(guān)注的話題，也是初中階段英語作文中比較熱門的話題之一。本篇作文規(guī)定了寫作內(nèi)容，第一段需要學(xué)生大概闡述野生動(dòng)物出現(xiàn)危機(jī)的原因，第二段需要寫我們應(yīng)該怎樣做。本文能緊扣寫作要點(diǎn)，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，各要點(diǎn)間連貫流暢，行文通順，短語地道，句式豐富，最后一句的諺語引入也恰到好處，發(fā)揮了一定的號(hào)召鼓舞作用。