韓天福

【欄目要求】

1. 將學生習作根據(jù)中考分值給出成績； 2. 在應該修改的地方劃線并標注序號；

3. 根據(jù)所標序號進行修改并說明修改的理由； 4. 給學生習作點評<優(yōu)點與不足>；

5. 請點評名師提供簡歷一份，包括：學校、職務(wù)、 職稱、榮譽、教研教學成果、照片一張。

來稿請寄： 430079 華中師范大學外國語學院《中學生英語》 雜志社 收

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How to Become a Good Student

As a good student， we should keep good habit① and ways in learning all the subjects. First of all， we should prepare for lessons before class. Its very important for us to listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. After class， we should review the lessons and finish our homework on time. It is good to study in pairs or groups.

If you want to make a great achievements②， you should go on exploring some new ways of learning. Therefore， summing up experience， drawing lessons and working hard are of great importance to us. For example， in learning English， besides we do more listening， speaking， reading and writing. We should practice to speak③ it in and out of class and remember new words， grammar as many and much as possible. If you have problems， youd better ask for teachers help. On the other hand， remember to take more exercises④ and enough sleep a day. When you get tired， youd better relax yourself.

I hope all these will be very helpful to us. Do you want to have a try？

湖北省十堰市鄖縣楊溪中學九（2）班 余青云

1. 優(yōu)點：

該同學英語基本功相對扎實，整篇文章內(nèi)容詳實，語言流暢，時態(tài)、語態(tài)正確，詞句運用得當，值得一讀。條件狀語從句運用自如。某些重點句式、詞組和固定搭配掌握的比較熟練。

2. 需要修改的地方：

① habits應改為復數(shù)habits；

② achievements應該為單數(shù)形式achievement；

③ to speak應該為 speaking，因為practice后接動名詞形式；

④ exercises應改為exercise， 該詞作“鍛煉、運動”講時為不可數(shù)名詞。

3. 評分：

按中考滿分15的標準，本文修改前可得14分。