李澤熙
I am interested in doing sports. There are many kinds of sports in my school. Such as football, volleyball, basketball and pingpang ball.
I always do sports when I have free time. After school, you can see me running on the playground. On Sunday, you can see me playing pingpang in our school.
Doing sports is good for my health. Not only doing sports makes me taller, but also makes me stronger. If I feel unhappy, I will do sports.
In my opinion, doing sports is the best way to make us relaxed.
簡評(píng):本文寫了學(xué)校都有哪些運(yùn)動(dòng)形式,同時(shí)說明運(yùn)動(dòng)在學(xué)生生活中的作用。學(xué)生能夠正確使用語法和相關(guān)詞匯,如果能多一些復(fù)合句就更加完美了。是一篇可讀性很強(qiáng)的作文。
( 指導(dǎo)教師:董文平)